Nationalism Senryu

Hii 😊
I've never come across Senryu, but then Im not that well up on poetry.
But I do love how you put these words together
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This was my first try at it as well. I'd never heard of it before, then took up a challenge for it and this is what I came up with. Can't wait to read yours

Ummm
I'm not sure if I'm upto that challenge.
Maybe it's time to think about it
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I know that I'm late replying but, c'mon and try your hand at Senryu poetry, you may find that you're really good at this!!

Hi Ashley.
A reply is always good to get, no matter when.
I'm afraid I'd make a dogs dinner trying to write that style of poetry

Is it because it's too concise? Or maybe the flow isn't just right? Either way, I'm sure you'll master the style :)

Hi Ashley,
Yea I just can't get to grips with it, it's like you say, too precise for me, grammer was never my best subject when I did attend school back when dinosaurs roamed.

Thanks but I doubt I'll ever get the hang of it
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