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Inner critic
To my inner critic,
Do you mind keeping it down,
You seem to increase the volume, when good things come around,
You're like a broken record, forever on repeat, telling me i'll give up, so my goals stay incomplete.
Do you mind keeping it down,
You seem to increase the volume, when good things come around,
You're like a broken record, forever on repeat, telling me i'll give up, so my goals stay incomplete.
Published 9th Dec 2021
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Wanted to add more but I couldn't seem to find the right words.
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10th Dec 2021 4:13am
Your inner critic will always do that, trying to hold you down. Fight Fight Fight.
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17th Jul 2022 4:29pm
With a few words you say a lot. We can be toughest on ourselves. Particularly if you compare yourselves to others and you feel like you are lacking. The toughest is accepting who you are and be happy with your life and accomplishments. Don't gloss over the success with the disappointments.
Your write is a life lesson and well written.
Your write is a life lesson and well written.
2nd Aug 2022 00:08am
Nice! A welcome change from some of the pieces here... good flow, good theme, concise, thought provoking.
21st Aug 2022 11:06pm
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