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Acrostic poem Resubmission

Adam and Eve
Dreams you see  
Victory is near  
Ended by fear  
Never give  
Take it, live  
Understand your reason  
Remake the season    
Errors we will make  
Stuff we will take    
   
Write your story  
It could end in glory  
Live within you  
Let yourself do    
   
Maybe you could be  
And then you could see  
Keep on dreaming    
Even when hope is leaving    
   
Let yourself go  
Invite thought flow  
Find the road  
Even when cold  
   
Be ready to say    
Even down I'm okay  
Take the journey    
Tell me what you see  
Ever think about things  
Remember that it stings  
   
Keys will open the door  
Eventually you win the war    
End the night    
Please go fight  
   
Life is complex    
Endless prospects    
Age of thought  
Right from wrong taught  
Nightmares in your mind  
Items you have to find  
No one true path  
Guess wrong, here is the aftermath    
   
The truth will come  
On it is your thumb  
   
Figure out how    
It can be now  
Not tomorrow    
Don't dwell in sorrow    
   
Wish upon a star  
Heroes might seem far  
Aim to be one  
The day isn't done    
   
Illness may hit you in the heart    
Sometimes we don't know how to start  
   
In battle we might lose  
Not before we make moves  
   
You might feel lost  
On top two paths crossed    
Understand how to pick  
Remake it from brick to brick  
   
Begin with a single step  
Overcome it with prep  
On top you are unstoppable    
Know you are remarkable    
   
Open your mind  
Find a sign  
   
Life is there  
It does care  
For voices they are not gone    
Eventually truth you will wander upon  
   
Written by CosiestPrism273 (Jordan Kunkel)
Published
Author's Note
I wrote and submitted this a while ago but decided to resubmit it for those who haven't seen it. It's one of the hardest things I've ever done. Its two sentences. Adventures will make life better. What is in your book of life. All of that is written acrostic. I think its one of my better works. Let me know what you think. I have another poem I'm working on but wanted to repot this.
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