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WE DUG A HOLE
WE DUG A HOLE
(collaboration between Nostalgic_hue Alienist and Archie23)
remember, remember
the dance of spring
the rooms are littered in scarlet
our minds were dragged into the abyssal darkness
in summer
we dug a hole
and filled it with six bodies
each for every heartbreak the world owed me
Autumn brought
new falling lessons taught
cold breeze now echoing in thought
forever tormented by lies within true love sought
Winter freeze
unforgotten ground and souls
remembered in six dismembered members lost
Fucked-up remnants of your fucked lost souls
(collaboration between Nostalgic_hue Alienist and Archie23)
remember, remember
the dance of spring
the rooms are littered in scarlet
our minds were dragged into the abyssal darkness
in summer
we dug a hole
and filled it with six bodies
each for every heartbreak the world owed me
Autumn brought
new falling lessons taught
cold breeze now echoing in thought
forever tormented by lies within true love sought
Winter freeze
unforgotten ground and souls
remembered in six dismembered members lost
Fucked-up remnants of your fucked lost souls
Published 7th Dec 2021
| Edited 11th Dec 2021
Author's Note
One can not plant the seeds of change
until one digs a hole.
until one digs a hole.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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9th Dec 2021 7:57pm
I can taste the torment; remnants of dismembered members. Great colab!
Reminds me of this...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/371937-myhands-arewet-withyourblood/
Reminds me of this...
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/371937-myhands-arewet-withyourblood/
10th Dec 2021 3:30pm
3rd Jan 2022 3:20pm
Nostalgic_hue Alienist posted the first poem
on a 2468 word challenge
summer dug a hole, no title.
I was inspired
I published one for Autumn and Winter
and asked if they wanted to write one for spring
and have me edit and post a collaboration.
The stanza was written and published.
The final poem was edited, complete and posted
with Nostalgic_hue as First as creator,
for they inspired the idea, and began the first seasons
Excellent work
on a 2468 word challenge
summer dug a hole, no title.
I was inspired
I published one for Autumn and Winter
and asked if they wanted to write one for spring
and have me edit and post a collaboration.
The stanza was written and published.
The final poem was edited, complete and posted
with Nostalgic_hue as First as creator,
for they inspired the idea, and began the first seasons
Excellent work
3rd May 2022 11:22am
