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lilt
lilting soul song
little notes play
I'm keening within
I am of no value
of no importance in the grander scheme of things
just particles of dust
blown about on the stage of life
we exchange thoughts
feelings turn in the eternity
binding me to you in the moment
looking out through my tears
my saltiness says I am real
a woman of feeling
a woman of worth
in the sanctity of truth
I am valued
Published 3rd Dec 2021
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3rd Dec 2021 3:51am
Nice. A tender sadness about it that makes the reader feel empathy for the writer.
Reminds me of a "palms up" approach. As in "see, just me, no weapons", (because people seem so on guard with each other too much).
Very well done.
Reminds me of a "palms up" approach. As in "see, just me, no weapons", (because people seem so on guard with each other too much).
Very well done.
3rd Dec 2021 4:34am
good evening dearest Styxian thank you for feeling this poem so deeply that you understand so much❤
3rd Dec 2021 11:15am
3rd Dec 2021 1:54pm
Yes. Too many people just demean themselves for no reason all the time. Yes. Be Positive. Regards, Robert.
8th Dec 2021 4:08pm
Crim, your sadness is tangible, reaching out through the page. I do love that you ended on a positive note pointing out that yes, you are valued.
Stunning verse.
Stunning verse.
