I can't believe it was so cheap, the budget just matched with mine, all these rooms at this price, it's old but it's quite devine

I put the key in the lock, the door seemed heavy and quite stiff, I forced it to open wide, it had that old house whiff

I opened all the windows, I made sure all the curtains were opened wide, but I just had a strange feeling, a gnawing deep inside

It felt like I was not alone, there was a presence of pending doom, no matter where I went it followed me, in each and every room

When I took a shower, I left the door open just in case, then I was in the kitchen and I swear something brushed my face

The house was very eerie, I told myself it's just because it's old, little did I know then of the horrors that would soon unfold

It started off with creaks and bangs, then there were voices in my head, nightly dreams of a old Crone, standing by my bed

The feeling of depression, like a weight I could not bare, the feeling I was always being watched, she was everywhere

It all came to a crashing end the lights just all went dark, the fuse box was in the basement a place my fear was sparked

A grabbed myself a flashlight, I opened up the basement door, there was a feeling of evil, like I'd never felt before

Then I heard the deep growling voice, it screamed just leave this place, I dropped the torch and bolted, like I was in a race

I left my clothes and belongings, grabbed my keys and closed the door, I lived in my car for weeks, vowing to return to there no more.....

Wow look at all this stuff, I can't believe my luck, I'm a girl who owns a great big house, I better unload my truck

I'm not sure why everything has been left in place, I hope no body died, well I'll soon make it into my home, once my stuffs inside

Written by averageJoe69 (Ron Summers)
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Watching ghost stories late at night on YouTube
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