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Doofus

Doofus!
Can’t get nothing right.
You try.
You try but nothing comes out.
How you wanted.

Doofus!
You can’t catch a break.
But why?
But why can’t you figure out?

Cause you are alone.
Standing on barren ground.
Energies avoiding you.
You know why that is?

You’re a doofus.

Hello.
Pathetic little fool.
Loser.
You heard me.

Why try?
Why even bother?
No hope.
A despairing sea.

You’re all alone.
Standing on barren ground.
And it’s all because you’re a doofus.
Written by Madcinder
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Totally unaimed at anoyone in particular. It's just a mean song.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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