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Doofus

Doofus!
Canít get nothing right.
You try.
You try but nothing comes out.
How you wanted.

Doofus!
You canít catch a break.
But why?
But why canít you figure out?

Cause you are alone.
Standing on barren ground.
Energies avoiding you.
You know why that is?

Youíre a doofus.

Hello.
Pathetic little fool.
Loser.
You heard me.

Why try?
Why even bother?
No hope.
A despairing sea.

Youíre all alone.
Standing on barren ground.
And itís all because youíre a doofus.
Madcinder
Written by Madcinder
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Author's Note
Totally unaimed at anoyone in particular. It's just a mean song.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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