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Drowning
Of course, it’s entirely possible to drown,
With your two feet on the ground.
Heart in pieces.
Though it’s not profound.
But he was blue.
And I was red.
And then I knew;
I was out of my head.
We could have been purple.
But we are drowning instead.
With your two feet on the ground.
Heart in pieces.
Though it’s not profound.
But he was blue.
And I was red.
And then I knew;
I was out of my head.
We could have been purple.
But we are drowning instead.
Published 22nd Nov 2021
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23rd Nov 2021 4:05pm
31st Mar 2024 4:58pm
There is a powerful imagery in the use of color and emotion and how heavy this becomes.
Great work.
Great work.
