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Primal

A River of lust
Reveals,
Rivalry,
Between souls.
CArpeNoctem_
Written by CArpeNoctem_ (CN_)
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Re. Primal
- Edited 21st Nov 2021 9:12pm
21st Nov 2021 4:06pm
Oooo..... so very potent!

love it.
🌹 - B
Bluevelvete
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(CN_)
21st Nov 2021 9:11pm
glad you loved it;-) xx
CArpeNoctem_
Re. Primal
(Viking)
21st Nov 2021 5:38pm
Yes.  Let the lovely hostilities begin....
robert43041
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(CN_)
21st Nov 2021 9:10pm
lovely indeed
CArpeNoctem_

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