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Whispers of graffitied ether
Published 20th Nov 2021
Author's Note
“A poem should have the touch ... the way sunlight falls on Braille.” .......silent lotus
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20th Nov 2021 6:41pm
dear Charles
i'm grateful for your kindness to let me know this whisper spoke so well
i look forward to becoming familiar with your inkwell
a warm smile
silent lotus
i'm grateful for your kindness to let me know this whisper spoke so well
i look forward to becoming familiar with your inkwell
a warm smile
silent lotus
22nd Nov 2021 2:17pm
I really like how thoughtful this poem is, in that it encourages the reader to think and not just passively receive. It's a little bit of wisdom that brings you to self-reflection, and even revelation, by way of a neatly and uniquely expressed idea. If that's not poetry, I don't know what is.
27th Nov 2021 2:23am
dear Turpin
i'm grateful for your sharing your observations
and insights
it is always a gift to receive just caring reply
a warm smile
silent lotus
i'm grateful for your sharing your observations
and insights
it is always a gift to receive just caring reply
a warm smile
silent lotus
28th Nov 2021 5:50pm
