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finesse
darkly innocent in lust
I succumb within my self control trembling
feelings wash over me
I need...
the body desires what the mind can conceive
a touch of violence
a show of dominance
honestly, if not, I know myself
I will be riotous
I am a seductress of finesse
touch my soul and my passions will answer
be tough with the woman
gentle with the girl I am
little sighs tell you when to shower me with attention
and when to withhold your affections
I like to feel the cold of the void of you
because when you shine your sun upon me
I am truly filled as if for the first time
penetrate my thoughts
and you will know me
the woman I am
not the one the world sees
Published 20th Nov 2021
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20th Nov 2021 1:49am
Oh the pressure of reading the signs right. When to be loving, gentle nurturing. When to be dominant, forceful and take control
Learn to read her right and a life of endless pleasure awaits
Love and light
Ron xx
Learn to read her right and a life of endless pleasure awaits
Love and light
Ron xx
20th Nov 2021 1:53am
you're right it's an investment learning a woman and she you... it's worth the while a whole other dimension of pleasure thank you Ron for making me smile❤
20th Nov 2021 1:57am
If I can make a lovely lady smile then my work is done
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
20th Nov 2021 1:56am
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20th Nov 2021 5:09am
Dearest Brenda— To have that presence loom large, basking within purposeful heated warmth, well, there's nothing like it.... Same goes for the dark side of the moon- when it's gone and missing, the plummeting coldness... that freeze ices through, to your very core.
It's rapture (and a whole lot of scary) to be fully seen and truly known...You really deliver that enormous emotional outpouring, with skill and an experienced hand. I adored this...
Absolutely marvelous, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
x
It's rapture (and a whole lot of scary) to be fully seen and truly known...You really deliver that enormous emotional outpouring, with skill and an experienced hand. I adored this...
Absolutely marvelous, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
x
22nd Nov 2021 6:01pm
hello beautiful Blue I love you thoughts so sensual and sexy thank you for sharing them❤
20th Nov 2021 1:08pm
There's that event horizon, just at the edge of an infinite dimension where pushing too hard by being overly riotous pushes away, but where playfully balanced is seductive. I think sometimes people test other's sincerity: their putting up with infinite tests of loyalty and desire breaks the bond, because dominance needs submission first, in order to avoid its being domineering. And, too, submission requires respect in order to submit something to be dominated. It's a balance. This is a very tight space you've written about and yet held the ideal as both subjective and objective without its being an object. That is craftsmanship.
22nd Nov 2021 6:03pm
I think you're right RT there is a balance in the push and pull of things...thank you graciously for sharing your thoughts here a man of intellect is sexy❤
23rd Nov 2021 3:40am
21st Nov 2021 11:52pm
That innocent lust hides the darkest desires for sure. I adore this beautiful expression of need, to have those needs felt and interpreted completely is divine. That push and pull, give and take building up to the most intense feelings. Oh what the mind can conceive; the images running through my head spurred on by your words, the desire for a touch of violence and dominance are truly exhilarating. I find your writing so intimate and deeply stimulating. You 'penetrate my thoughts' :) Another magnificent write.
22nd Nov 2021 6:05pm
good morning beautiful Kristina thank you for sharing your intimate thoughts on this write... they are very sexy and understanding of this type of desire...I deeply appreciate you❤
24th Nov 2021 5:00pm
Another piece of art crim. That closing stanza is completely outstanding.
Gotta love a relationship that really has profound depth of not just emotion but all carnal desire.
Well done.
Gotta love a relationship that really has profound depth of not just emotion but all carnal desire.
Well done.
