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Flying at Icy Altitudes
Flying at icy altitudes toward what we thought were graceful skies,
We fell against unforgiving rocks where our pounding hearts grasped for one more moment of life.
Finally, pressed together as one, we fell in silence.
We fell against unforgiving rocks where our pounding hearts grasped for one more moment of life.
Finally, pressed together as one, we fell in silence.
Published 15th Nov 2021
Author's Note
I was thinking how our expectations of life change as we go through time. Thank you to Joni Mitchell for "icy altitudes."
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15th Nov 2021 12:31pm
as if to be frozen in time.
such power of thought in a few lines.
simple, complex...sweet
such power of thought in a few lines.
simple, complex...sweet
15th Nov 2021 8:38pm
Thank you for the sweet and insightful comments. You help me see more from my writing than I thought was there.
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17th Sep 2022 3:16am
Now this makes me wonder what the "icy altitudes" were all about with Joni Mitchell.
The intangible non physical phenomenon that love is.
As we try to grasp and touch no matter how close people get to each other they still can't get hold of it.
The intangible non physical phenomenon that love is.
As we try to grasp and touch no matter how close people get to each other they still can't get hold of it.
