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Benevolent Benefactor
There is no energy
except what you extend
via action or thought
The Universe
is a benevolent benefactor
who returns only
what you emit
No more
No less
except what you extend
via action or thought
The Universe
is a benevolent benefactor
who returns only
what you emit
No more
No less
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 15th Nov 2021
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Re. Benevolent Benefactor
15th Nov 2021 00:11am
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15th Nov 2021 00:13am
Yeppers, Poet! We have no one to point the finger at but ourselves when the boomerang comes home!
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15th Nov 2021 00:15am
If I mess up it's on me
If others mess up, take the Scorpio wrath
Either way redemption a go go
If others mess up, take the Scorpio wrath
Either way redemption a go go
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15th Nov 2021 00:19am
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15th Nov 2021 1:49am
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2021 2:03am
I'd recommend a name change from the Big Bang to the Big Ben - but then it might get blamed for trying to control us like Big Pharma, Big Tech, Big Tobacco, Big Whatever Else LOL!
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18th Nov 2021 2:51am
Re. Benevolent Benefactor
15th Nov 2021 6:35am
Karma is a bitch. What comes around goes around. If you do good then good comes of it if you bad then you deal with the consequences. Keep on writing.
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18th Nov 2021 2:46am
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16th Nov 2021 00:53am
I struggle with pragmatism in that, I am able and willing to see things as they truly are, but I struggle with the sensibility. Karma gets hers, regardless.
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Karma is neither good nor bad, kind nor cruel ( I just liked the alliteration of the title ). Karma is just energy that returns to the sender, often times 10-fold because the Universe is like that; it magnifies one's desires and doesn't differentiate between whether those desires are ( per human terms ) good or evil. It simply responds to one's own vibrational emittance.
Thanks, Eerie.
Thanks, Eerie.
Re. Benevolent Benefactor
17th Nov 2021 00:58am
Sometimes accepting karma requires a time-frame-context over several lifetimes - which I guess adds a healthy curiosity to things that happen in our lives. (I find Life-Between-Lives {Michael Newton} helpful in this respect)
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Re: Re. Benevolent Benefactor
18th Nov 2021 2:47am
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11915/345/#544140
Thanks for the recommendation, Josh. I'll add that to my reading list. Which is growing exponentially! LOL!
Thanks for the recommendation, Josh. I'll add that to my reading list. Which is growing exponentially! LOL!
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19th Nov 2021 6:07pm
Re. Benevolent Benefactor
22nd Nov 2021 7:38pm
I guess for me, it begs the question, are the pains and tribulations punishment for the things I've done in the past (I punished myself for a lot of things), carrying a guilty conscience for a while. That first line sure does delivery some heavy perspective.
Outstanding work.
Best of luck in the comp.
Outstanding work.
Best of luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. Benevolent Benefactor
25th Nov 2021 1:11am
I don't believe in punishment, Wally. The Universe/God/Source doesn't punish. We punish ourselves more than anyone else. And there are no mistakes. Mistakes are simply experiences. No more or less.
Happiest of Thanksgivings to you and your family! May your home be blessed with much love and happiness!
Happiest of Thanksgivings to you and your family! May your home be blessed with much love and happiness!
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4th Dec 2021 1:34am
Quite a provocative stance. I do believe in punishment and if it is warranted I thoroughly enjoy dishing it out. On the other hand I do hate being punished. A true hypocrite am I, I dare admit.
Love this piece Ava, very thought provoking. Good luck in the comp 👍🏻
Love this piece Ava, very thought provoking. Good luck in the comp 👍🏻
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Re. Benevolent Benefactor
23rd Nov 2021 3:09am
Wow the universal principle of give amd take and you reap what you sow! Kudos for this great sublime poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
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25th Nov 2021 7:42pm
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1st Jan 2022 3:44am
That comment made me think of Justin Timberlake in his music video!
Thank you and Happiest of New Years! May it be blessed with much love and happiness!
Thank you and Happiest of New Years! May it be blessed with much love and happiness!
Re. Benevolent Benefactor
2nd Jul 2022 7:00pm
This some great wisdom here at ahavati sight. Because, the course of life is what u make it as well
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Re. Benevolent Benefactor
18th Aug 2023 00:17am
I like how succinct and practical a philosophy this is. It’s such a perfect little aphorism. I want it on a poster!
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