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carnality
dark falsetto richly beautiful
serenading the angels
at risk of falling below
sweet pain confess
you enjoy the hurt
singed melancholy
an opera of moans
yes, please touch me there
it is my need that betrays me
a naked blush says I'm feeling you
do I have to ask?
will you come in deeper?
passionate indulgences
pardon me Sir I'm not asking for your love
in the depths I am known
a seductress over want
come closer
I hate that I want you
it stings to know I crave you
my lips are swollen from the admission
intent upon my mission to please you
delve into my darkness
there you will find release, Sir
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Re. carnality
14th Nov 2021 11:12pm
an opera of moans...I honestly won't say how that makes me stimulated...very beautiful...no one has ever stimulated me with poetry before
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15th Nov 2021 00:44am
good evening dearest William I'm so pleased you enjoyed this and were stimulated on another level through poetry thank you for the read and lovely comment💕
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Love the hate and want at the same time
The best goes on doesn't it ?
BIG LIKE
HOT PIC
The best goes on doesn't it ?
BIG LIKE
HOT PIC
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15th Nov 2021 00:45am
thank you graciously dearest Poet for such a sexy comment yes love and hate... I'm happy you enjoyed💗
Re. carnality
15th Nov 2021 00:15am
Live the desire and distain in this. Very sexy, very erotic
Love it
Love and light
Ron x
Love it
Love and light
Ron x
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15th Nov 2021 00:46am
good evening dearest Ron thank you for the love on this write it's deeply felt💕
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15th Nov 2021 1:51am
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15th Nov 2021 1:40pm
I love the imagery, I could hear the sounds from the dark falsetto and opera of moans in my mind. The longing to be touched and played like the most beautiful instrument. Practically begging to be in concert, to be the concert. Just the deepest desires burning to be fulfilled without a need for love. Needing that sweet painful submission and release that you find through meeting all of his darkest desires. Another spectacular one filled with lust and passion; beautifully erotic. Loved it!
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18th Nov 2021 1:48am
thank you graciously beautiful Kristina for such a beautifully thoughtful and sexy comment...I love hearing from you💗
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18th Nov 2021 00:04am
The carnal desire is most demanding desire in us. You showed your need and expression to please to be pleased. I love your expression and your need to be appeased.
Lust for love,
Kristopher
Lust for love,
Kristopher
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18th Nov 2021 1:50am
good evening dearest Kristopher thank you for such a sexy poetic thought I deeply appreciate it💗
Re. carnality
22nd Nov 2021 7:35pm
Wow, another awesome piece, the submissive talking opening, inviting to delve into the depths and find release. Completely titillating and torrid.
Well done!
Well done!
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22nd Nov 2021 9:10pm
hello Wally thank you for feeling this one your thoughts are deeply appreciated❤