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beautiful world
after making
love
lying together
in bed
holding you
in my arms
silence painting
the room in
memory of
pleasure
and for the first
time in a long
time
the world was
beautiful
again
Published 14th Nov 2021
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14th Nov 2021 2:43pm
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14th Nov 2021 4:09pm
It can be such a beautiful tender thing ...
Love this ...
"silence painting
the room in
memory of
pleasure"
Love this ...
"silence painting
the room in
memory of
pleasure"
14th Nov 2021 6:44pm
Anonymous
14th Nov 2021 6:52pm
There's nothing else that can quite compare to that particular emotional space that you've so eloquently and minimalistically described, bk!
Perfectly evoking the sheer glow of hopeful tenderness.... *sigh
Oh how I relish in that ultimate, pleasurable intimacy.... ✨
Truly exceptional poetry - 💙
Much love,
🌹 - B
Perfectly evoking the sheer glow of hopeful tenderness.... *sigh
Oh how I relish in that ultimate, pleasurable intimacy.... ✨
Truly exceptional poetry - 💙
Much love,
🌹 - B
14th Nov 2021 7:50pm
I am greatly pleased that you've grasp the importance and tender power that can arrive after making love, along with the peacefulness of having connected to another person on the most human level possible. Thank you, Blue.
hugs/Love,
buddhakitty.
hugs/Love,
buddhakitty.
22nd Nov 2021 6:26pm
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