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sweet incense
sweet surrender, make love to me on the aether
smell sweet incense on the air
lithe body full of need
will you fulfill my desires were we to touch?
two heavenly bodies
giving in to want
hello sin can I be yours?
destined kisses, I taste you
you are the lover I crave
divinity in the flesh
a carnal devil made manifest
you are sex
I didn't know before it could be this good
a give and take
two bodies twisted in the act
we know each other on another level
so deep a connection it's felt in the soul
it hurts to be this close
it hurts when we pull apart
in my heart I'm yours, my love
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14th Nov 2021 1:44am
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14th Nov 2021 8:39pm
good afternoon dearest Ron thank you for the love here it's deeply appreciated💗
Re. sweet incense
14th Nov 2021 1:58am
When the right soul is presented to you, more than just lust and sin are at your will. Excellent Brenda
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14th Nov 2021 8:40pm
hello dearest Tim thank you yes you're so right about that it's a deep connection that allows this level of desire💗
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Re: Re. sweet incense
14th Nov 2021 9:59pm
good afternoon dearest poet I will do my best these kind of poems only come when I'm deeply aroused...thank you for the love on this one💗
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14th Nov 2021 1:39pm
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14th Nov 2021 10:00pm
hello beautiful Kitty thank you lovely lady for reading and such a kind comment💕
Re. sweet incense
14th Nov 2021 6:35pm
picture lends well to the line 'Lithe body full of need', adds to the seductiveness of the poem.
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14th Nov 2021 10:02pm
hello dearest Solomon I think there is an art to choosing the right photos to go with a poem I spend a lot of time matching them to a poem I'm happy you enjoyed this thank you💗
Re. sweet incense
14th Nov 2021 7:49pm
Such gorgeous emanations, Brenda.... I feel the powerful connection and the density of a deeply palpable love...
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B
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14th Nov 2021 10:03pm
hello there beautiful Blue thank you lovely lady from my heart...I'm so grateful you are here...I feel truly smiled upon with the love you've shown my poem and me💕
Re. sweet incense
14th Nov 2021 10:50pm
Another gorgeous expression of longing and desires. I could smell the sweet incense as it permeates into the body giving over completely to sin and lust. Such a powerful connection that it can be felt with an intercourse of not just bodies but of the soul. I think these lines really sum it up so well 'it hurts to be this close' 'it hurts when we pull apart'. I could definitely feel the incredible ache that reaches the soul of such a tight bond. Absolutely love it!
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15th Nov 2021 00:52am
good evening beautiful Kristina thank you lovely one for the love you've shown me today I deeply appreciate it... you have a beautiful and passionate soul💕
Re. sweet incense
22nd Nov 2021 6:07pm
"it hurts to be this close
it hurts when we pull apart" damn.
Lovely piece crimsin. It's truly one of those things that is so difficult to put into words but yet you managed to express that so beautifully.
it hurts when we pull apart" damn.
Lovely piece crimsin. It's truly one of those things that is so difficult to put into words but yet you managed to express that so beautifully.
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22nd Nov 2021 9:06pm
good afternoon dearest Wally thank you for feeling this so deeply...I truly appreciate your thoughts❤