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Leaves in fluttering sunlight
LEAVES IN FLUTTERING SUNLIGHT
I see them only out
of the corner of my eye
like falling leaves flying back
to the limbs
waiting
so shy
so patiently
to flutter down again
for a speck of bread
and a drink of water
from the crystal dish
dancing in joy before me
in a sparrow spectacle
which only some eyes can see
I see them only out
of the corner of my eye
like falling leaves flying back
to the limbs
waiting
so shy
so patiently
to flutter down again
for a speck of bread
and a drink of water
from the crystal dish
dancing in joy before me
in a sparrow spectacle
which only some eyes can see
Published 12th Nov 2021
Author's Note
I was just feeding the critters. The squirrels came by earlier. The sparrows came by to show me a happy dance
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12th Nov 2021 8:22pm
12th Nov 2021 8:27pm
You had me immersed and I felt myself transcending into your lovely picturesque narrative....
Gorgeously conveyed, Archie
🌹 - 🐦 🐿️
I thank you for sharing it with us
—B
Gorgeously conveyed, Archie
🌹 - 🐦 🐿️
I thank you for sharing it with us
—B
22nd Nov 2021 12:01pm
Thank you for your comment. I love animals and nature, and I appreciate your comment. I attempt to communicate my meaning to animals and humans to the best of my abilities.
12th Nov 2021 9:12pm
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