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Less Might Be Best
A tender touch will gain you much.
One soft word will get you heard.
A shorter kiss will get you missed.
If you hold my hand, I might join your plan.
One soft word will get you heard.
A shorter kiss will get you missed.
If you hold my hand, I might join your plan.
Published 11th Nov 2021
Author's Note
Sometimes I'm attracted to subtle advances.
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2021 7:24pm
Hi Nizana,hope ur well? I enjoyed this poem.
The subtleties of your poem engenders my softer side! Great piece of work. X
The subtleties of your poem engenders my softer side! Great piece of work. X
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Sometimes these little gestures are overlooked.
When these subtleties are missed the moments are lost.
Then we have to start all over again.
When these subtleties are missed the moments are lost.
Then we have to start all over again.
