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honest & respectful "critique"

   
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††††it's not fair to the reader(s), when you have them read a whole page worth of words; especially when it's less about "poetry" and more of a personal drama series; †  
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†† † what is considered too much?; even if someone admires, and appreciates the well written stuff.... why be extra? †  
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†but, who am I to "judge"; it's just a friendly nudge; but, you need someone to "bring you back".... instead of kissing up †  
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PeaceFlpw
Written by PeaceFlpw (Peace Flow)
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#good energy
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