honest & respectful "critique"

    
   
   
    it's not fair to the reader(s), when you have them read a whole page worth of words; especially when it's less about "poetry" and more of a personal drama series;    
   
   
     what is considered too much?; even if someone admires, and appreciates the well written stuff.... why be extra?    
   
   
 but, who am I to "judge"; it's just a friendly nudge; but, you need someone to "bring you back".... instead of kissing up