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Memories
"Because memories is what kept her going.
All she had was memories.
Everything is memories.
Nobody can take her memories.
Memories
Memorie
Memori
Memor
Memo
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Dement
Dementi
Dementia
Nobody can take her dementia.
Everything is dementia.
All she had was dementia.
Because she is what kept dementia going."
~Rafael dJdS
All she had was memories.
Everything is memories.
Nobody can take her memories.
Memories
Memorie
Memori
Memor
Memo
Mem
Me
M
.
D
De
Dem
Deme
Demen
Dement
Dementi
Dementia
Nobody can take her dementia.
Everything is dementia.
All she had was dementia.
Because she is what kept dementia going."
~Rafael dJdS
Published 6th Nov 2021
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6th Nov 2021 11:32pm
This was really quite poignant.
I think the formatting was the golden gem for me. It looks like two knife points almost balanced on top of each other, and it instantly makes me think how fragile the human mind is — how all of us are on knife edges with our minds, and how this echoes out into dementia patients. The repetition was also a great tool in communicating some of that frustration.
It was quite an emotional read really as it got me thinking of my Nan who had the condition and passed on 4 years ago.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I think the formatting was the golden gem for me. It looks like two knife points almost balanced on top of each other, and it instantly makes me think how fragile the human mind is — how all of us are on knife edges with our minds, and how this echoes out into dementia patients. The repetition was also a great tool in communicating some of that frustration.
It was quite an emotional read really as it got me thinking of my Nan who had the condition and passed on 4 years ago.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
7th Nov 2021 3:15pm
Thanks a lot for sharing this comment! I'm really happy that it came over in this way.
Thank you again, be safe
Thank you again, be safe
