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Independent
Have your own money
Don't depend on anyone unless they can depend on you
Don't let anyone buy you
If you choose to be owned
So be it
Gossip is poison
If you love someone
Tell them
If they don't love you back
Move on
Wear a lot of black
Accent color to enhance the darkness
Smile and show your dimples
Eat eggs occasionally
Drink fine whiskey
Keep fit
Don't depend on anyone unless they can depend on you
Don't let anyone buy you
If you choose to be owned
So be it
Gossip is poison
If you love someone
Tell them
If they don't love you back
Move on
Wear a lot of black
Accent color to enhance the darkness
Smile and show your dimples
Eat eggs occasionally
Drink fine whiskey
Keep fit
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Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 2:08pm
This is good “feed your head” advice…
I agree with every line!
I don’t drink whiskey, but if I did it would be a fine whiskey.
I agree with every line!
I don’t drink whiskey, but if I did it would be a fine whiskey.
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Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 2:11pm
Let me know when you want to learn about whiskey
I'll design a package for you !!!
Glad the rest is good advice
Thanks NG
I'll design a package for you !!!
Glad the rest is good advice
Thanks NG
Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 2:13pm
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6th Nov 2021 2:16pm
Re: Re. Independent
7th Dec 2022 9:18pm
We will put it in over ice in a lowball weighted glass. Sip slowly. Enjoy the burn and glow.
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 2:40pm
Indulge in the things you love and do the things you always wanted to do for there is no guarantee of a tomorrow for any of us
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Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 3:01pm
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 2:47pm
good morning dearest Poet sage advise
I like the power of having my own money
but not the responsibility of it
I think I must prefer to be dominated
I've had it both ways and I seem to prefer the latter...
great write...
I like the power of having my own money
but not the responsibility of it
I think I must prefer to be dominated
I've had it both ways and I seem to prefer the latter...
great write...
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Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 3:02pm
I know you love to serve
We need more women like you
Creative
Ripe for using
Great writer of the sensory
Thx B
❤
We need more women like you
Creative
Ripe for using
Great writer of the sensory
Thx B
❤
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 4:46pm
Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 4:48pm
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 5:02pm
Poet, artist, motivational speaker too?
They’ve always said not to dwell on things too much. Your advice here is great. We can all live healthy productive lives.
Great work!
They’ve always said not to dwell on things too much. Your advice here is great. We can all live healthy productive lives.
Great work!
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Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 5:07pm
I try to talk righteous ideas without being preachy or floaty.
Never thought of myself as a motivational speaker but it's not out of the question
Wonder if I could slip in some dirty poems as well ?
Thanks Wally
Never thought of myself as a motivational speaker but it's not out of the question
Wonder if I could slip in some dirty poems as well ?
Thanks Wally
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 5:59pm
Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 6:06pm
Hopefully there are other fine things you fo that you enjoy Francisco
Thx for the nod
Thx for the nod
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 7:24pm
I absolutely love this. My mother engraved Independent into my skin as I grew up.
Taught me the importance of being able to take care of myself. I have been with my husband
for a very long time but I have always worked. There is a certain power in knowing whatever comes or
goes I will be okay - no matter what - because I will make sure.
I love to drink but I tend to get a bit rowdy as the drinks come my way. LOL
Not in an bad way - but in a fun way. I remember on one occasion my mom popped in for
a visit when I just got home from a night out with my friends. She gave me a look and kinda smirked on her way out and told my husband to make sure I got to bed. As she turned to leave I spanked her really hard on the butt.
I sobered up really fast and we looked at each other and just laughed. I told her "okay okay I'm going to bed"
All great advice with this one!!
Taught me the importance of being able to take care of myself. I have been with my husband
for a very long time but I have always worked. There is a certain power in knowing whatever comes or
goes I will be okay - no matter what - because I will make sure.
I love to drink but I tend to get a bit rowdy as the drinks come my way. LOL
Not in an bad way - but in a fun way. I remember on one occasion my mom popped in for
a visit when I just got home from a night out with my friends. She gave me a look and kinda smirked on her way out and told my husband to make sure I got to bed. As she turned to leave I spanked her really hard on the butt.
I sobered up really fast and we looked at each other and just laughed. I told her "okay okay I'm going to bed"
All great advice with this one!!
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Re: Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 7:42pm
Some valuable insight into your lifestyle and family
I love when fellow readers take the time to let me in to their private lives. I love to drink too and my wife loves to tell the story about my peach vodka debacle. Embarrassing every time but a lot of laughs too. I was a wild man in my single days and that night she saw some of the folk lore in action.
Hmm, if I could remember it, I’d write it.
Thanks so much A
Love your visits and appreciate the RL
AMIGO
I love when fellow readers take the time to let me in to their private lives. I love to drink too and my wife loves to tell the story about my peach vodka debacle. Embarrassing every time but a lot of laughs too. I was a wild man in my single days and that night she saw some of the folk lore in action.
Hmm, if I could remember it, I’d write it.
Thanks so much A
Love your visits and appreciate the RL
AMIGO
Re. Independent
6th Nov 2021 7:29pm
-find something you love and pursue it relentlessly
-say thank you often
Great wisdom, dear Poet. ✔
❤❤k
-say thank you often
Great wisdom, dear Poet. ✔
❤❤k
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Re: Re. Independent
Agree
Find what you love and beat it to death ….
Appreciate the read and nod towards wisdom and manners
❤️
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Find what you love and beat it to death ….
Appreciate the read and nod towards wisdom and manners
❤️
🤠
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Re: Re. Independent
7th Nov 2021 3:04am
Re. Independent
Anonymous
7th Nov 2021 2:33am
Hey PS……wow what great wisdom you ink upon your page…….sure wish I had read this a life time ago……really enjoyed this…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Independent
7th Nov 2021 3:06am
Loving your avatar FG
Yeah, I'm an older buck now
Spewing. I've themes
Then in my other poems
Still a dirty dog
Do the math love bug
Mentor stuff
Thx
Xx
Yeah, I'm an older buck now
Spewing. I've themes
Then in my other poems
Still a dirty dog
Do the math love bug
Mentor stuff
Thx
Xx
Re. Independent
Anonymous
7th Nov 2021 7:13am
Kind of sounds like "have some principles," which is becoming rarer and rarer nowadays.
Men without principles, or as I like call them, "women."
That's in addition to politicians and pedophiles.
Also, no offense intended to women, it's just a woman isn't in exactly the same position of a man when it comes to doing these things, having principles, or "balls."
Enjoyed!
Men without principles, or as I like call them, "women."
That's in addition to politicians and pedophiles.
Also, no offense intended to women, it's just a woman isn't in exactly the same position of a man when it comes to doing these things, having principles, or "balls."
Enjoyed!
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Re: Re. Independent
7th Nov 2021 2:08pm
Laying some pipe here
People need to be responsible to themselves
A lot of things get in the way
Takes a lifetime to get it together sometimes
Eggs and whiskey help
Thanks Mark
People need to be responsible to themselves
A lot of things get in the way
Takes a lifetime to get it together sometimes
Eggs and whiskey help
Thanks Mark