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Breathing space

Breathing space
written November 3rd, 2021

Space stretches
into the distance
I send my breath
towards you

soft like a breeze
tickling your hair
embracing you
pooling around you
making this space

for you
to be
to rest
to feel peace
a breathing space.
Written by senid
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Author's Note
I used to make collages years ago from magazine clippings. Luckily magazines still exist lol. The collage came first, and then the poem.
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