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Tic Tac Oh!
now new little thrills
precise cane strike forms long low hills
warp done now the weft
precise cane strike forms long low hills
warp done now the weft
Published 29th Oct 2021
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29th Oct 2021 10:06am
I like the invention of using the welts left by the cane / crop as a kind of visual grammar / doodling ...
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29th Oct 2021 3:36pm
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