Valuable lessons learned from ghosts of a bygone era

another 'stirring'  vision...more more...L

Thanks for that lovely bit of encouragement, L.
I appreciate it... *wink

These headier pieces are few and far between for me to write but who knows what or where my driving imagination will go, next!?!

It's nice knowing you'll be keeping tabs!

All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B

I love it when a guy fingers the bitch and gives her his finger to lick  her own juice......Kisses, Robert.

If she's more than willing and wanting... Consenting debauchery, is definitely an aphrodisiac!


Thanks for reading!
🌹

Sex dreams are hot.  My mouth is watering.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Glad to hear you're dampened, Francisco... lol
That's an effect, for sure!!

I appreciate you reading
🌹

Hey there, T
I feel like I pushed the envelope a bit, but that was very intentional and to be honest, kind of refreshing!... lol... 😈

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add. I am deeply appreciative.

Glad you enjoyed.
🌹-B

Push it right off the table as far as I'm concerned.  This is beautiful, sexy, dirty, down right nasty with a touch of class and finesse. And the image just brings it that much more over the edge. Beautifully written.

Hey there, T  
 
No worries about commenting! I appreciate the feedback.  
 
I think I was somewhat caught up in my own thoughts and (over) spinning my wheels. I feel like growth, moving forward, positive change etc.... are the building blocks of maintaining one's happiness and enlightenment. I had thoughts and feelings like I might have been reverting back to the security of my beginnings (where I started by writing erotica and sex poetry... it was my safe place) possibly feeling regurgitated, repetitive and stale. I never want to continually rehash a theme a zillion different ways... The dreaded same ol same ol. I can see and fully understand how tedious that becomes! Having a poetic voice is extremely different than writing about the same thing over and over again. I DO NOT want that to be my unfortunate spiral.... I think writers fall into that pitfall, not realizing and then never really get out it. Becoming pigeon holed.... ugggh. No thanks!  
lol...  
 
I am not diminishing anyone's preferences, peccadilloes or kinks. I wouldn't dare. I have a ton. This is selfishly about me..lol... and for my wee little writer's brain, my preference, my want and wish is to stay fresh and as open as possible.  
 
Hence, my concern about this piece. Was I rehashing from my safe kinky space? Maybe... but I believe that inspiration also blew in amongst a breeze that's renewed of some very fresh and original air..... Ahhhh!  
 
It might not be for everyone but it's deeply real and honest. That's my truth and all I can expect from myself.  
 
Thanks for the awesome comments, again, I'm deeply appreciative! 🙏🏻  
 
🌹 - B

You're awesome, DS!
Thanks for the morale boost.
I am so grateful for your visit and appreciative of your killer kind words.

I'm all smiles you found the delicious, dirty beauty!

Thanks for the RL add as well ;)

All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B

The passionate clinch you wish you had. Favourite lines:

taming
extracting
fucking me
exactly
like
I'm
fucking—back

Where need
this piercing
pales
all
else.

Well there's Solomon!! *wink  
 
So glad you enjoyed this potential clinching (a wish indeed!)
 
Very good taste in your favorite line choices! I was partial to  
"unmercifully rubbing  
the center mass  
of my utter destruction"  
lol....but that's why poetry is so awesome—It's subjective to the reader(s) eye, where we can each find something that speaks directly to us!  
 
I appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts, Solomon... it's always a pleasure to see you 🦋  
🌹 - B

Go girl, cold shower time. Super erotic, very sexy.  Awesome write very hot read
Great job sweetie.
Loved it
Love and light
Swooning Ron xx

Dearest Brave Knight!
I am all sexy, wry smiles, reading 😏 your amazing comments. Thank you for such wonderfully expressive remarks! It's been awhile since I've actually felt like the explicit warning prompt was appropriate in it's use for any of my poems.. lol ...A little bit of much needed debauchery is like a breath of fresh air, methinks.  

I'm so so glad you enjoyed yourself, reading.  
All my gratitude for the list add and your shining light.

Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹 - B

Well i was wondering
were ypu in my head switchimg on the vivid imagry

lucly poet that inspired  this
Stirring  dirty passionate spill

I do tend to creep in sometimes! ... 👀 🕵🏻‍♂️

haha...
I was lucky enough to find inspiration via a poet that hasn't logged onto DU in over 7 years. I have read almost all of their 100 poems and I'm just blown away by their poetic style /voice/ brashness/ sense of carefree and ballsy approach to being in the world. Sooo amazing!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the generous list add, Colin. We all need a good little dirtying up from time to time!
heh heh heh 😈

Much love,
🌹-B
💙x

This is indeed that wild style that is true to life. No one makes love in the sense of black and white tv. We as humans like what we like, to be taken to the edge and joined in jumping off the cliff. This is a piece of real life fire, to tight Lady

Thanks, Me.
Your words are very encouraging and honest. It's true, we're not all cut from the same cookie cutter and to each their own, for sure.

I'm just going through stuff, which leaves my feelings scattered, as it does my confidence. My writing taking the biggest hit.... just feelings of deep inadequacy. I loathe that....


I appreciate you taking the time; I'm wholeheartedly grateful

Be well, my friend
🌹 - B

50 vivid shades of grey

lol....Yeah, I did take the deep dive into raw truth and a 'no holds barred' kind of write.

Thanks for commenting, Slip
I really appreciate your insight

Hope you are doing well,
🌹 - B

Just passed four score years !!!!!  but I still enjoy a visit to the sweet factory

Ohh wow, Slip! Happy belated 80th! That's an awesome milestone!! Congratulations!

I giggled at your comments about the sweet factory 🏭? I'm not sure if that's a euphemism, but either way it made me smile!

Thanks for the lovely giggle and the kind comments!

Just marvelous...

The build up, the sensual puzzle pieces,
the molecules coming together to create reactions.

The poise of your pen, exploring the aspects of control and loss of control.

The wonderful closing, as merging and fusing,
and the disappearance of everything...

The illumination...

Very cool Blu.

I am illuminated.

Awww... If anyone could make me feel a bit better about my delve into true raw, open honesty, it's you. <-----Yep!

Your deliberate and thoughtfully chosen feedback has me renewed and breathing easier. It's somewhat psyche penetrating and just weighing in general, that I felt a bit bothered by being so vulnerable and open with this piece. I guess we're always learning about ourselves and growing..... These questioning moments for me, being proof positive of that. Maybe I've just been in a more contemplative mood... lol

Regardless, I feel indebted to you, my friend.... lol...You really affected my mood with your comments and I'm so so appreciative!
Please know that I feel inextricably linked to you and your sensibility. My heartfelt and sincere thank you's are a given (I hope!) but I also wanted to convey that—our connection. Be it because of the writing that causes a sort of symbiotic link or just because it is, what it is.... I feel fortunate and incredibly lucky that kismet was kind to me, by way of you.

So, yes.... a thousand thank-yous... and much much more. ✨

Much love, endless respect and awesomely unique kinship,
🌹 - 💙
—Blu

Whew, that was like breaking in a mustang mare bareback!!!  Wild and untamed!

0088 Approved and noted!

Yeeehaw!! 🏇🏻  
*wink  
 
That 0088 really is a jack of all trades!!! Wow 🤯.. heh heh....  
 
(Gotta get my eyes 👀 on those notes, too!)  
 
Thanks for reading; I'm delighted that you derived a tiny bit of pleasure from my little poem.  
 
I adore your visits, Leo... don't be a stranger!  
 
🌹-🕵🏻‍♂️  
—B

Being so close to Halloween I was anticipating a dire ending involving spirits. Totally loved the brush with death:
“the center mass
of my utter destruction”  

Thanks for sharing!

Hey there JM ;)
Thanks for stopping in and leaving your thoughts with me. I really appreciate you taking the time!

I'm so delighted you enjoyed.

Warmest regards,
🌹 - B

(Unfortunately, no Halloween influence on this one but I still have a few days for further spooky inspiration!!.. lol.. )

I'm not a fan of textspeak, but OMG!
❣️❣️❣️

Doh!
*giggles

I hope that's a good "OMG!"

would probably guess, affirmatively... 😂
Thanks, KP.
For me, this piece took a lot of courage, so I very much appreciate that shout out.

🌹 - B
x

Oh my❣ Oh my❣ Oh my❣ Dear, Lady Blue
This piece is packed with such delicious imagery just drippintg with much coveted sensuality. You alraedy know which would be my favorite passage,
"were is I,  
am the one who is soaked through-  
from the lingering  
smell of myself "
What a particullary exciting, ecstasy inducing masterpiece. Bravisima sexy BB🐻💕🐰

Just wow! .... ((blushes)).... BB!! Your "Oh my's❣️" are too freaking cute... lol 😂... Thank you for all your fantastic excitement, my lovely friend. You had me all gushing smiles @ 'ecstasy inducing masterpiece'... which it's far from but I adore your thrill at reading this hotter than my usual style kind of piece. I wasn't sure about it and I was questioning the poem as a whole... so your joyous, and rambunctious nature really makes me feel like I was wrong to be so caught up and in my own head. Thank you Thank you for the kind and cute af sentiments, the list add and for being so honest in ref to the yummy parts you enjoyed best! 😋... I absolutely love that inside info!! lol.... 😂😈  
 
It's sooooo great having you here tonight.  
 
All my warmest appreciation, my dear friend 🙏🏻  
🌹-B  
xo  
🐻 💋🐰

Hotttttttttttt Dammmmmmmmmmm!!!
How can I respond to the pure genius of this Erotic Masterpiece?
There really are no words to express my arousing thoughts from this sensuous gem.
I am savoring the sensuality from your ingenious mind.
Each creative expression spilled from your beautiful mind stimulates the body and soul.
Excitement continues to build with every verse, filled with your seductive imagery.
The perfect foreplay of the mind translating to the body through climactic poetic prowess.
I may have to take up smoking because suddenly I feel the need for a cigarette.
An orgasmic mind ''F''
....another perfect erotic write to add the chronicles of ''50 Shades of Bluevelvete''.
A true work of erotic Art!

🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
Omg!! ... How can I ever live up to such incredibly powerful and truly astounding comments!!??? 🤷🏻‍♀️  
THEY are the works of beautiful art, methinks!

I humbly humbly thank you for your generosity in thought and deed, my lovely friend and dear kind soul. I am so syked that you derived such stark erotic emanations and felt deep, my longings and intent.... It doesn't get any better than that for a writer to read /hear! Yesss!  

A thousand thank-yous and a thousand more hugs that I'm sending your way, 🤗

Much love and respect —
🌹B
xoxo

Oh, My blue-eyed Princess, you have written an amazing A++ + A+ erotic poem. Oh, to be that poet would be a gift from  the gods. You are so amazing that I sometimes wonder if you are real, but may UPs say YES!!! Hugs and kisses, Oral

WOW! Oral... You are so complimentary and awesome in your delivered praise. I am blown away by the fervor of such a tremendous outpouring, my dearest bard. I am truly lucky to have you visit with such gloriously kind and beautifully supportive sentiments. You make me feel the definition of special and I'm extremely humbled by the showering affection; while another part of me is simultaneously illuminated in the fantasy of arousal!

Ohhh how supremely decadent and delicious!
Thank you for reading and for your otherworldly comments, Oral.... I'm left basking... beyond!

Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
x
—B

There is MUCH MORE my beautiful Princess, xoxo, Oral

I concur, O...
One never knows what tomorrow may hold!



🌹-B
x

OMG...(clutching my pearls)
Yeah, one can never forget those kinds of lessons.

Hahaha!!!  
 
 .... still hahahaha.....  
 
I'm glad you've had similar 'lessons!' *wink  
Thanks, W.  
You're awesome!  
🌹 - B

Nights like that are absolutely awesome!


hugs,
buddhakitty.

I'm convinced those kind of nights are the kinds of images that flash before one's eyes at the end..... (Oh God, how I hope so!!)  
 
Thanks for the lovely comments, bk.... You're a sight for sore eyes-💙  
 
Very much obliged, my friend 🙏🏻  
🌹 - B  
xo

You definitely nailed it on this.
Very well written and sexy 😉
Love the word choice as always
I really liked the third to last stanza. The way you wrote it was very cool! Great erotic write! And whomever you were thinking of is awful lucky!

Hi, William ;)  
Your generous feedback really hits a nerve with me and highlights a great opportunity of motivation and a gentle reminder for myself to continue to keep up with creating new poems more often (or more than I have been)  
 
I am divinely delighted that you found some sensual sexiness tempered throughout my attempted eroticism.  
.....  
My smile is gleefully wide!  
 
All my warmest gratitude and deep thanks for visiting and for leaving me your lovely thoughts and insightful remarks.  
 
Be well, my friend 🙏🏻  
 
🌹 - 💙  
B

That is an incredibly sweet response. Thank you. And I'm genuinely happy interest brought you some joy. I'm a big fan of yours so that makes me happy.
This was more than an attempt lol
Any guy would be turned on reading this. You did great 👍

From another angle, I appreciate that this is not a slip Tab A into Slot B poem.

The mind is the major sex organ. Hence, a knee to the solar nexus allows that this becomes a piece about vulnerability, giving in taking position.

More than simple voyeurism, this allows for the most obvious truth, that all sex is physically an act of self-manipulation, but to give that vulnerability, not in an exchange as much as in a display, to use rubbing instead of penetration, allows the mind to revel, to be the penetrating member, and that becomes a receiving of deep longing.  This becomes symbolic of deep intimacy.

Biomechanically, I find this far more the gift, this very graphic button pushing.

Hey there, RT
I am so grateful for how you framed your comments, here, for me. (thank you!) Especially your notion of "symbolic deep intimacy" and my version of "graphic button pushing."  

You see, I have previously found myself struggling with writing a piece that actually reflects a truer version of my own inner monologue surrounding sex, raw intimacy and just how far I was willing to go and how much of myself.... my truth... That I was willing to share publicly.... I shy away from blatantly graphic porn-esque writing (although I have ZERO issues with that style and I often find myself reading and enjoying the work of masterful poets who expertly partake within that realm) because I feel like it comes across as self serving, forced and strained, whenever I have tried writing similarly, previously. It's not been my authentic self that is or ever was reflected like I desired upon the page. I adore erotica and I believe that we all have cavernous spaces within ourselves that absolutely bask, drinking in deeply of some sex fueled imagery that strokes us just right, hitting that perfect nerve....

That's what I hope one day to convey. The truth of what I mentally gather along with the luck of fortune; finding a way to birth that mental picture, into a uniquely dirty stimuli, so immense in it's power that it is felt within every single letter.

This was my first time, that I felt like I inched toward that goal and not away from it.  

Your feedback, reinforces my intuitiveness.

Damn fine comments, that I humbly thank you again, for. Your insights lead to my ignited inspiration and I am beyond grateful for that.....and likewise for your visits.

In vast kindness,
🌹 - 💙
B

You're so very welcome. I felt that same way, and so I left for a few years to write at Fetlife, where graphic images were the standard.  

That way I could spend my time talking pillow talk and inner, spiritual intimacy. I hid away there for about 4,000 poems.

My point was to take that dog and pony show feeling completely out of my work. I think I was self-conscious about my own sensitivities.

I'm extremely demi, and my own sense of dominance hinges on having something submitted first, to guarantee mutual consent.

I didn't even have that vocabulary, so my time there has really helped me fill in my own blanks. I think most people are so busy trying to score that they skip mutual satisfaction, and so I had to learn the word "compersion."  

I appreciate the gift of someone's orgasm, especially if they are getting off for and on me, so rubbing and  my performing oral on someone are submissions to me, and bring out my dominance.  

I didn't have that verbal structure to understand my own sensitivities before. So, I think I can actually, really hear what you're saying.

Thank you....it's nice to be heard also.

Hey there, RT  
I've read and reread your comments so many times, I swear that they're burned into my brain by now!  
 
We've had a somewhat similar path, finding ourselves.. at least I feel like I can 100% relate to your personal experiences .... I came to DUP from a fetish site called The Cage, where I was looking for something that I never found but in the process, I started a blog there which ultimately ended up morphing into my delve into poetry.... I found clarification about myself and my desires / needs, in part by writing... and likewise, my sensitivities made it difficult to fully realize and understand... I was unaware in the moment that I needed to slow my self down and come to an eye opening...  naturally...  
 
I left there, after coming to DUP. I found exploring self expression and trying to hone any poetic skill set I might have, to possibly be more valuable. The idea that I might be able to uncover what I desperately needed to uncover ...as well as figuring out my submissive nature..... was an aphrodisiac.... and somewhat scary... lol... I didn't realize then but it was to be innately found within my pen....  
 
I still am a work in progress. Perhaps I always will be?  
 
You're so very spot on, when you say it's nice to be heard.... Without any doubt, it is. It's also utterly refreshing and freeing... like flying.  
 
Warmest and multiple thank you's, in return.  
 
I am beyond appreciative of meeting you.... I hope we continue to stay in touch.  
Best,  
🌹 B  
 

You are an indulgence without apprehension in a game of love, sex and sensuality. Your beauty is to be devoid of shame and shyness and participate with enthusiasm like a free spirit. I vivid picture of an intimate moment. It is not easy to sketch such a scene. I have yet to read more your to know you better.

Love,

KS

Dear, KS
I am so grateful for your visit and for your thoughtful and eloquent kind words. Words that emanate a careful consideration that see a lot, I believe and are immensely felt . You are completely correct, in saying that penning this level of intimacy isn't easy; because it's not, not for me. It's extremely challenging and something that I have strived towards getting correct (from my minds eye to the page) for a good while. My usual poetic voice isn't as sexually raw, open or quite as intense. So, you choosing this particular poem as an introduction... Well, let me just say, I hope you won't be disappointed when or if you read further... lol..... I do hope you will!  

I deeply appreciate all the loveliness you've shown,
You're always welcomed here—

Warm regards,
🌹 - 💙
B

Hello Blue,

Thank you for your energy filled response. Action and words two different things But in your I find action with the same high degree. I will read more and learn about you. It reminds me woman who was also submissive but she felt her secured and safe realm to play freely and without restrain. I write erotic to clear my mind and heart to write other than erotic. I hope you will read and like my recent posts. Thanks for your sweet response. Look forward to hearing your comments on my poetry.

Warmest love,
KS

I love how you open yourself literally for all to enjoy. So refreshing to read such words of passion that I can use as I alter my writing taking your suggestions.

Thanks for the lovely sentiments and your extremely generous kindness... I deeply appreciate the time you've taken to read and experience.

It's much appreciated!
Happy Holidays new friend
🌹 - ❄

Hi… This was an incredible piece. An incredible tribute.

You are an amazing artist

🥰

-💙

A vision of submission written in smoky smears of holy liquid brought to life in a totality of surrender for fortune's sake. Each golden flame of lust wraps around me and ignites me as only your verse can. There is sacred incense in your perfumed passion that pleads to my masculinity for what your femininity beckons herein.

XoXo
John

Thank you for sharing to the comp and giving this another whirl on DUP, I enjoyed reading this ✨

I loved this!