deepundergroundpoetry.com

Rising (2021)

when we're alone
and watching each breath
entering...leaving
our lives before death

fluttering, muttering
thoughts flying by
we sit and wonder
who's asking why?

behind the questions
feeling the awe
of consciousness shining
there's something much more

than ego's pretensions
or fires in the heart
something propels us
now as we start

vibrating slowly
feeling the buzz
with heartbeats' intrusions
in sync now because

far away yearnings
have all disappeared
what once seemed so strange
no longer is weird

when we're alone
and watching each breath
entering...leaving
our lives before death

we sit and wonder
who's asking why
as something inside us
rises to fly...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
Published
Author's Note
Best listened to with headphones
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3 reading list entries 0
comments 4 reads 371
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
COMPETITIONS
Today 5:28am by DCLXVI_1989
SPEAKEASY
Today 4:53am by SweetKittyCat5
COMPETITIONS
Today 4:05am by wallyroo92
SPEAKEASY
Today 4:04am by SweetKittyCat5
POETRY
Today 3:41am by Grace
COMPETITIONS
Today 2:18am by diddi