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summer thoughts in autumn
Little black dress
Simple strand of pearls
One bracelet
The earrings I gave you
Modest heels
Intelligent beauty
Radiant smile
Summer evening
Last rays of light
Twilight stares
Dusk and aura
Lovely
Simple strand of pearls
One bracelet
The earrings I gave you
Modest heels
Intelligent beauty
Radiant smile
Summer evening
Last rays of light
Twilight stares
Dusk and aura
Lovely
Author's Note
One of my first poems ....
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Re. summer thoughts in autumn
25th Oct 2021 4:40pm
Beautiful visuals in this poem. You can't beat some old fashioned romance.
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25th Oct 2021 5:27pm
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25th Oct 2021 7:23pm
Oh, it's so complicated. The tactile sense of my dress, pearls, jewelry; the physical sense of my body walking in low heals; all the other senses alive; and jealousy, I want to be this person. The poem makes me feel alive, which seems so much bigger that what words can describe.
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Re: Re. summer thoughts in autumn
25th Oct 2021 8:20pm
Yes
Everything is complicated
Glad I can make you feel good in your skin !’
Stay tuned
Thx
Everything is complicated
Glad I can make you feel good in your skin !’
Stay tuned
Thx
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25th Oct 2021 9:11pm
The love of little tight black dress on a woman is hot. Keep on writing.
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Re. summer thoughts in autumn
26th Oct 2021 00:58am
Dear PS,
The simpler the sexier. What I like was the confidence of the wearer. She knew she needed very little to accentuate her natural beauty.
Would we, could we all be so lucky. Big Dig! H🌷
The simpler the sexier. What I like was the confidence of the wearer. She knew she needed very little to accentuate her natural beauty.
Would we, could we all be so lucky. Big Dig! H🌷
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Re: Re. summer thoughts in autumn
26th Oct 2021 2:28am
Dear H
I'm actually more conservative than I portray
Give me sexy, simple and confidence and I'm good to go and appreciate
My early writes were my best, how do I get back home again??
Thanks so much H
I'm actually more conservative than I portray
Give me sexy, simple and confidence and I'm good to go and appreciate
My early writes were my best, how do I get back home again??
Thanks so much H
Re. summer thoughts in autumn
26th Oct 2021 6:03am
I heard somewhere recently that male desire, after a certain point--say, when the relationship matures--is dependent on inhabiting a place "peace" with the woman, hence the biblical prohibition against contentious-ness.
This poem gets at the feeling of peace.
Enjoyed!
p.s. like the avatar!
This poem gets at the feeling of peace.
Enjoyed!
p.s. like the avatar!
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Re. summer thoughts in autumn
26th Oct 2021 11:11am
When a relationship matures I believe you see what
LOVE really is .... The crash boom psycho lust bonanza changes. Then you step into affection and intimacy that is phenomenal.
I've written about this quite a bit as I am long into a marriage that still feels new. We're still learning about each other and that's the glue.
As always Mark
I appreciate your read and comment
You help me explore within myself
The avatar is my painting side, wild in the streets
BIG THANKS
LOVE really is .... The crash boom psycho lust bonanza changes. Then you step into affection and intimacy that is phenomenal.
I've written about this quite a bit as I am long into a marriage that still feels new. We're still learning about each other and that's the glue.
As always Mark
I appreciate your read and comment
You help me explore within myself
The avatar is my painting side, wild in the streets
BIG THANKS
Re. summer thoughts in autumn
30th Oct 2021 1:21am
I like the word association and the color scheme in the visual, those emotions carrying over into fall.
Nicely done
Nicely done
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30th Oct 2021 1:23am