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SLIPS AWAY
SLIPS AWAY
absence occurs quickly
Beauty flies away quickly
Slick silence defines the next day
all that is loved slowly slips away
absence occurs quickly
Beauty flies away quickly
Slick silence defines the next day
all that is loved slowly slips away
Published 25th Oct 2021
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25th Oct 2021 10:54am
25th Oct 2021 12:12pm
Dear A,
Your poem is touching and very heartfelt. The speed at which beauty and love can dissipate is incredible yet getting over the loss can be slow and painful. I admire the succinct message of this write. H🌷
Your poem is touching and very heartfelt. The speed at which beauty and love can dissipate is incredible yet getting over the loss can be slow and painful. I admire the succinct message of this write. H🌷
25th Oct 2021 2:20pm
Life, is a constant flow and knowing when to hold on, is pertinent ! The vulnerability of this write is visceral…
Anonymous
25th Oct 2021 7:35pm
I feel the ache of that dawning awareness, Archie....
—Well done
🌹 - B
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—Well done
🌹 - B
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22nd Mar 2022 8:51am
