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Invisible Love
almost a rainbow
almost a light
almost a sunrise
dispelling the night
the shadows surrounding
enveloping all
the spaces between us
through which we now fall
almost a moment
almost a touch
almost a feeling
almost so much
almost an island
almost apart
almost together
almost the start
almost inside you
push in and shove
while consummating
invisible love
dispelling the shadows
enveloping all
of the spaces between us
through which we now fall
almost a light
almost a sunrise
dispelling the night
the shadows surrounding
enveloping all
the spaces between us
through which we now fall
almost a moment
almost a touch
almost a feeling
almost so much
almost an island
almost apart
almost together
almost the start
almost inside you
push in and shove
while consummating
invisible love
dispelling the shadows
enveloping all
of the spaces between us
through which we now fall
Published 24th Oct 2021
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2021 5:52am
I love the anticipation... the idea behind it....
the repetition of 'almost'... it's juuust quite.... teetering on the cusp....sooo close, etc...
Clever building up..... increasing the emotional impact....
🌹 - B
the repetition of 'almost'... it's juuust quite.... teetering on the cusp....sooo close, etc...
Clever building up..... increasing the emotional impact....
🌹 - B
24th Oct 2021 9:32pm
24th Oct 2021 1:13pm
24th Oct 2021 9:33pm
