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Candle Wax Wept
You came
In expanding pictures
of fractals of frame -
Examining me,
as I did the same -
Awakening:
You are
in
the
shedding
Skin
of
a
Serpent -
In the minds eye,
where dream states
Melt
Away
&
Die
Into layers of blacks
weeping
candle
Wax
Ritual -
As consciousness
expands into
all
of
This.
Published 23rd Oct 2021
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23rd Oct 2021 3:40pm
24th Oct 2021 1:55pm
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2021 3:49pm
Like striping away the layers.... a slow revealing.... I can't get "Melt with you" by Modern English out of my head, after reading.... lol....
Silly Blu!... *wink
To me, this is ultimate in its intimacy. To see beneath, or work your way through....a bit ambiguous but that's what's intriguing.... to ponder...
I enjoyed the journey and imagery, Cipher
I hope you are doing well, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Silly Blu!... *wink
To me, this is ultimate in its intimacy. To see beneath, or work your way through....a bit ambiguous but that's what's intriguing.... to ponder...
I enjoyed the journey and imagery, Cipher
I hope you are doing well, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
24th Oct 2021 1:57pm
Modern English should feel supremely honored...
:)))
Totally love your impressions...
and you... :)))
Thank you so much my friend.
(Yes... umm... Expect a letter from me soon...)
:)))
Totally love your impressions...
and you... :)))
Thank you so much my friend.
(Yes... umm... Expect a letter from me soon...)
23rd Oct 2021 4:23pm
I so like the candle’s tears, weeping wax, where dream states melt away
Visually creative all around
Visually creative all around
24th Oct 2021 1:58pm
