a short poem about us

Wfew.... 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥
Ohhh. my.


(i'm a whole lotta jealous!)
🌹 - 😈

Wow. No one has ever been jealous of anything I've done before, lol.



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buddhakitty.

Interesting compliment -  'you were a pyro' (fireworks).

Pyrotechnician- pyro for short. I also thought it was interesting.
Thank you, Solomon.


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buddhakitty.  

Hey there.

I really like this one. I do however think that the final stanza does seem to weaken it a little for me, and I’m not sure that it’s necessary. Kinda comes across as an after thought. But then I’m a fan of impact.

That being said, the language in this is simply gorgeous. There’s something about that pyro image that really speaks to me. I think it’s just beautiful sometimes to watch the world burn, no matter what that entails.

Gorgeous writing for the imagery alone. Thank you for sharing.

-M

Thank you, Missy. The last stanza speaks of getting so caught up in the moment that everything seems to come together as one- was it the wind, or was it her pleasure, then becoming lost in that moment entirely. Since this was based on a real life experience, I was trying to communicate what that moment was like for me.
Thank you for the wonderful comments.

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Wow..cool write.

my tongue,

a serpent crawling
through
Eden,

paradise
taken.

--i thought that was damn creative

Thank you, william. Very much appreciated. I am pleased you like the imagery.


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buddhakitty.

For sure. This is quality work.

Marvelous.

Thank you so very much, Cipher.




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buddhakitty.

Amazing use of metaphors, A+ Hugs and peace, }O{

Thank you, Oral. I'm am pleased that you enjoyed this write.



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buddhakitty.

Such an enigmatic and yet hot torrid write.
Nicely done.

It was hot!  Thank you, wally.



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buddhakitty.