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MAY I ADORE YOU?
PLEASE
Let me love, respect,
worship, and deeply
desire you; each extra
pound, wrinkle and
other body features
you wish didn't exist.
YOU
are amazing, romantic
and share pleasure
like a goddess from ancient
Greece. Your outward appearance
is enhanced multiples times
because of your inner beauty.
OH,
meet me at the kissing place
and I will worship you
nose to toes with soft
kisses just the way you like.
OKAY?
Let me love, respect,
worship, and deeply
desire you; each extra
pound, wrinkle and
other body features
you wish didn't exist.
YOU
are amazing, romantic
and share pleasure
like a goddess from ancient
Greece. Your outward appearance
is enhanced multiples times
because of your inner beauty.
OH,
meet me at the kissing place
and I will worship you
nose to toes with soft
kisses just the way you like.
OKAY?
Published 16th Oct 2021
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16th Oct 2021 10:29pm
16th Oct 2021 1:54pm
how nice to be cherished with perceived 'flaws' rather than in spite of. Nicely done!
16th Oct 2021 11:25pm
16th Oct 2021 2:13pm
16th Oct 2021 2:21pm
lucky is she if and when given this kind of love. . . no boundaries not even numbers could quantify. Awesome write as always :)
16th Oct 2021 11:24pm
16th Oct 2021 3:18pm
How wonderful. Loving in spite of human imperfections.
Tender write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Tender write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Anonymous
16th Oct 2021 5:25pm
Absolutely beautiful! Beauty is fleeting but he sees her beautiful spirit shine out from within. Perfect! I love the 'giving pleasure like a Greek Goddess'! High compliment 😉
Anonymous
16th Oct 2021 8:10pm
It's because of, not in despite of. You ask all the right questions, my lovely bard.
You see?... Your words steep of a longed for desire— now understood... Chock-full of deep emotional impactful. Reader's, who've been hungering for exactly what you've deliciously delivered, moved and very much satiated!
*wink
Outstanding ink, O
-hugs
🌹 - B
You see?... Your words steep of a longed for desire— now understood... Chock-full of deep emotional impactful. Reader's, who've been hungering for exactly what you've deliciously delivered, moved and very much satiated!
*wink
Outstanding ink, O
-hugs
🌹 - B
16th Oct 2021 11:05pm
My Princess, as always you say the perfect and insightful words, no wonder you are adorned. Hugs and peace, }O{
16th Oct 2021 11:13pm
Man you did it again with another inspiring write. Every woman needs a love like that where their flaws are overlooked.
