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Violence Screams, Love Whispers
It was all violence with you
Before I knew you
Vacant shock statements
Then we started something else
Neither of us knew what it would become
Still learning
Hushed tones
Violence screams
Love whispers
Before I knew you
Vacant shock statements
Then we started something else
Neither of us knew what it would become
Still learning
Hushed tones
Violence screams
Love whispers
Author's Note
Mixed Media image by Poetspeak
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Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 3:01am
The art is wild, like brain pattens maybe processing the violent shock statements.
I say, enjoy the still learning part! There’s always OB also 😁
I say, enjoy the still learning part! There’s always OB also 😁
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 3:14am
Just when I thought I knew a lot it was when I found out I had a lot to learn. You're too young to know it but one day you will say, "ah that's what Poetspeak was was referring to ...."
Thanks on the art and your support
See you at the dock ...
🤠🔜
Thanks on the art and your support
See you at the dock ...
🤠🔜
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15th Oct 2021 3:20am
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 3:32am
Hunter S Thompson is a personal hero for drinking Wild Turkey 101 for breakfast.....often
Johnny Wad, an icon of his time
I'll take this praise
Dig
BIG LIKE THE NOD
Thanks Ted
Johnny Wad, an icon of his time
I'll take this praise
Dig
BIG LIKE THE NOD
Thanks Ted
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
15th Oct 2021 3:42am
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 3:48am
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 4:13am
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15th Oct 2021 12:48pm
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 7:52am
Life has already been a wild ride.
I like your poetry. Always thought provoking.
I like your poetry. Always thought provoking.
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 12:50pm
I appreciate your like on my poetry E
Keep battling it out and writing
You'll do fine
Thx
Keep battling it out and writing
You'll do fine
Thx
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 10:21am
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15th Oct 2021 12:51pm
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 2:41pm
good morning dearest Poet
your tastes are so sexy
this confession is beautiful💗
your tastes are so sexy
this confession is beautiful💗
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 3:06pm
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 7:48pm
Love the contrasting artwork and poetic structure; another masterpiece from the General. Hugs and peace, O{
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15th Oct 2021 8:58pm
Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 9:26pm
Pleasure is all mine...thanks for the promotion to "right-hand man" status. You are amazing. :) Oral
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 9:29pm
I'm only as good as my people who support and report to me
One day you will be top dog !!
One day you will be top dog !!
Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 9:32pm
Oh, something to look forward to; I've been the "Underdog" but not the "Top dog." Love your remarks and sense of humor. Hugs and peace, }O{
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15th Oct 2021 9:41pm
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15th Oct 2021 9:47pm
And you are the truthful POET with magic words and UP lifter power. It's exciting to ponder. Thanks and HUGS.
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Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 10:14pm
Sorry to intrude I forgot to ask, how do I qualify as TheOralizer to be the Top Dog? Any prerequisites? Thanks,
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Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 11:43pm
It all feels a bit scrambled to me, Poet, like eggs but I bet it makes perfect sense to you, seeing you were in it! Nice artwork also, adding further to the mixed message.
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Re: Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
15th Oct 2021 11:46pm
Good choice of words Billy
This relationship is solid but never certain
Does that make sense ?
Thx on the art
Stay tuned for more ...
This relationship is solid but never certain
Does that make sense ?
Thx on the art
Stay tuned for more ...
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
25th Oct 2021 5:41pm
Not sure why the images makes me think of a tornado, all the chaos going around while in the middle it's calm, much like the violence you spoke about on the opening line, and the calm of whispers on the inside.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
25th Oct 2021 6:25pm
The beginning was really violent
Exciting too
Once we got past that there was a lull
But then it got better .,.
Yin Yang always Wally
Exciting too
Once we got past that there was a lull
But then it got better .,.
Yin Yang always Wally
Re. Violence Screams, Love Whispers
Anonymous
8th Dec 2022 3:24pm
Favorite art thus far
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