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Broken
now that you are broken
means
we have
gone beyond
the barriers and boundaries
the lies
the secrets
now that you are broken
means
i have
received consent
and authority
have taken control
have taken responsibility
now that you are broken
means
you are
vulnerable
unprotected
open
raw
now that you are broken
means
you are
ready
to grow
to evolve
to transform
now that you are broken
means
we can
begin
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
means
we have
gone beyond
the barriers and boundaries
the lies
the secrets
now that you are broken
means
i have
received consent
and authority
have taken control
have taken responsibility
now that you are broken
means
you are
vulnerable
unprotected
open
raw
now that you are broken
means
you are
ready
to grow
to evolve
to transform
now that you are broken
means
we can
begin
(C) 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 14th Oct 2021
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14th Oct 2021 5:37pm
wow dearest poet
I give a good fight
but I love a man who takes control...
great write...
I give a good fight
but I love a man who takes control...
great write...
15th Oct 2021 4:58pm
Anonymous
14th Oct 2021 6:20pm
It's that kind of strength, to do what is most needed (of dire needs both known and yet to be uncovered), that loudly beckon.....
You expertly convey the very heart of it, in a marvelously unfolding.
🌹-💙
x
You expertly convey the very heart of it, in a marvelously unfolding.
🌹-💙
x
15th Oct 2021 4:59pm
14th Oct 2021 8:08pm
15th Oct 2021 4:59pm
I love this poem , incisive!!!...
a favorite subject of mine
"she hated the pain but loved being forced to take it"
a favorite subject of mine
"she hated the pain but loved being forced to take it"
17th Oct 2021 6:58pm
