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now is this feeling
rain came down, and
it washes the murder
of this future created-
it is the result of effort.
the dawn called and fell
back;
no place to feel.
or live.
I got wet
it washes the murder
of this future created-
it is the result of effort.
the dawn called and fell
back;
no place to feel.
or live.
I got wet
Published 14th Oct 2021
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
14th Oct 2021 3:26pm
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14th Oct 2021 4:39pm
Yes scattered like me. Ty for the insight. It's great to chat with people who understand that kind of stuff. So seriously thank you
14th Oct 2021 4:57pm
14th Oct 2021 5:50pm
Oh you noticed that. A lot of my stuff first line and last line... Smarty pants in the house! Yeah Freud would have a field day I'm sure ty
