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These knots
with hips that haunt
demurely denying I flaunt
even as I wickedly taunt
a little attention is all my want
for just one person do I jaunt
the one I set my trap for, caught
the secrets of my body taught
between sheets and covers how we fought
what riotous damage wrought
how I worship you to think I'm hot
with flowers that you've bought
love and lust my only thoughts
all else comes to naught
can you please untie these knots
demurely denying I flaunt
even as I wickedly taunt
a little attention is all my want
for just one person do I jaunt
the one I set my trap for, caught
the secrets of my body taught
between sheets and covers how we fought
what riotous damage wrought
how I worship you to think I'm hot
with flowers that you've bought
love and lust my only thoughts
all else comes to naught
can you please untie these knots
Published 14th Oct 2021
| Edited 19th Dec 2023
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14th Oct 2021 12:40pm
Oh yes! this is super sexy. You hooked me with the picture but it only got better from there. I love 'with hips that haunt' - even get a little sexy outfit on Halloween vibe from that line. ;) You have woven a beautiful piece of temptation and lust that definitely caught me. 'using sheets and covers we fought' is such an incredible line. I love the imagery and oh how mesmerizing the swaying of hips can be, like your verse. The rhyming is flawless...
14th Oct 2021 5:11pm
The meek demon inside me is purring so loudly. Thank you for the gift of your words, I'm ready to take on the world. it is such a pleasure when the poem works, isn't it. Big hug.
14th Oct 2021 5:03pm
14th Oct 2021 5:25pm
It is so much fun when the rhyming works like this as each line rings true with deeper meaning. Life and fantasy merge so well in this simple poem. Thank you, big kiss.
14th Oct 2021 8:44pm
So true; and thanks for the big kiss and a bigger one back to you. Hugs and peace, O
14th Oct 2021 9:01pm
The little games we play to garner that certain someone's attention...sexy piece
It's all fun and games until someone pokes an eye out with swaying hips. Eek! I didn't just say that out loud, did I?
14th Oct 2021 10:19pm
15th Oct 2021 9:34am
I was so unsure about this poem, was it silly or too risque or just insulting. It seems to work and I'm happy with some of the truths in the lines. Thank you for being kind.
