These Knots

Oh yes! this is super sexy. You hooked me with the picture but it only got better from there. I love 'with hips that haunt' - even get a little sexy outfit on Halloween vibe from that line. ;) You have woven a beautiful piece of temptation and lust that definitely caught me. 'using sheets and covers we fought' is such an incredible line. I love the imagery and oh how mesmerizing the swaying of hips can be, like your verse. The rhyming is flawless...

The meek demon inside me is purring so loudly. Thank you for the gift of your words, I'm ready to take on the world. it is such a pleasure when the poem works, isn't it. Big hug.

Beautiful rear shot and a great poem. Hugs and peace, O

It is so much fun when the rhyming works like this as each line rings true with deeper meaning. Life and fantasy merge so well in this simple poem. Thank you, big kiss.

So true; and thanks for the big kiss and a bigger one back to you. Hugs and peace, O

The little games we play to garner that certain someone's attention...sexy piece

It's all fun and games until someone pokes an eye out with swaying hips. Eek! I didn't just say that out loud, did I?  

Nicely penned ... great flow ... good job with the sustained rhyme ...

I was so unsure about this poem, was it silly or too risque or just insulting. It seems to work and I'm happy with some of the truths in the lines. Thank you for being kind.