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Bittersweet Serenity
~in dusky
twilight~
cast adrift
on an
endless sea
~quiet under
moolight~
a stillness
descends
upon the
soul
~i hear
feel
my heart~
in the
hush
it's known
Who what
Love is
the ripples
of me
searches
for your
~shore~
Published 14th Oct 2021
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- Edited 14th Oct 2021 6:56am
14th Oct 2021 6:54am
I've read this poem more than a few times and it gets better and better with each read.....
This type of poetry (yours!) really captures my attention and sears into my psyche... The crisp, short, concise lines; where each and every word has it's importance, allows the whole poem to come together in such a perfect amalgamation of deep feeling and emotional truth....
*sigh*
✨ 💫 ✨
Total swoony swoon....worthy.
🌹 - B
This type of poetry (yours!) really captures my attention and sears into my psyche... The crisp, short, concise lines; where each and every word has it's importance, allows the whole poem to come together in such a perfect amalgamation of deep feeling and emotional truth....
*sigh*
✨ 💫 ✨
Total swoony swoon....worthy.
🌹 - B
14th Oct 2021 10:27pm
