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You Want to Possess Me
You want to possess me
Own my thoughts
Shape my persona
Turn my darkness to your light
In the third person
He's not for sale
Don't offer me your body
Unless pain is your ultimate price
Out of prayers
Seeking nothing but your solace
13th Avenue, New York City
Your heathen awaits with black roses
Own my thoughts
Shape my persona
Turn my darkness to your light
In the third person
He's not for sale
Don't offer me your body
Unless pain is your ultimate price
Out of prayers
Seeking nothing but your solace
13th Avenue, New York City
Your heathen awaits with black roses
Author's Note
Unless pain is your ultimate price ....
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Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 1:53am
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13th Oct 2021 2:19am
Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:05am
Black roses. Hmmmm. Out of prayers, yep...thats me to the max. Solace...what's that?
Big like on this one.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Big like on this one.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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13th Oct 2021 2:20am
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:46am
I understand your comment
Canolies too
Lower East Side bakeries
Jack Webb - Just the facts
Thanks Ted
Canolies too
Lower East Side bakeries
Jack Webb - Just the facts
Thanks Ted
Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:50am
She likes your uncertainty, your questioning, seeking her solace, you’ve already been bought, now “you” in the second person hold tight to your black roses 🥀
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:56am
You've studied me
All those evenings on the tugboat
Docking at the island with no name
Always appreciate your vision
🤠💥💢🧡
All those evenings on the tugboat
Docking at the island with no name
Always appreciate your vision
🤠💥💢🧡
Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 4:18am
Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 4:42am
Liking the Holy Hell
Great line
May use it
From the Queen of Darkness
I thank you Brenda
A dozen black roses for you....
Xxx
Great line
May use it
From the Queen of Darkness
I thank you Brenda
A dozen black roses for you....
Xxx
Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:21pm
good morning dearest Poet I love being called the Queen of Darkness I'm honored you would use that line I'm happy you liked it...have a beautiful day today sexy...
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 4:21pm
You are very much the Queen of Darkness
You own that
Nobody comes close .....
X
You own that
Nobody comes close .....
X
Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 4:26pm
aw dearest Poet I'm beaming...to be seen by people as you are and to find acceptance you know I'm blonde when people meet me in the day to day they are surprised by my dark side because I tend to conceal it... it's good to express it here...
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Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 7:21am
I'm starting to pick up some specific elements in your work.
To some degree, I get an impression of the artist-as-Peter-Pan--the frank adolescent sexuality and aggression; the understand of the sexual sphere with woman & art as "Neverland."
However, there are shifts, starting to appear in the same poem, as is the case here. Especially the reference to self in the 3rd person.
Then the shifts in time / place, like splinters or refractions.
Reminds me a bit of John Berryman's Dream Songs, esp. the first 77, also Ted Berrigan's sonnets.
Berryman an alcoholic and academic by training; Berrigan, a speed freak who was on the margins of the beats--
Continuing to enjoy the work!
To some degree, I get an impression of the artist-as-Peter-Pan--the frank adolescent sexuality and aggression; the understand of the sexual sphere with woman & art as "Neverland."
However, there are shifts, starting to appear in the same poem, as is the case here. Especially the reference to self in the 3rd person.
Then the shifts in time / place, like splinters or refractions.
Reminds me a bit of John Berryman's Dream Songs, esp. the first 77, also Ted Berrigan's sonnets.
Berryman an alcoholic and academic by training; Berrigan, a speed freak who was on the margins of the beats--
Continuing to enjoy the work!
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 12:14pm
I have to check ou your poets Mark
You've mentioned them a lot
Yes, I played around here with some different concepts, I think you got me now. I keep trying. Never know how it's going to shape out but that's the beauty of writing poetry. I'm not disciplined but I do over writing in general from sex to observation....
Appreciate your visits as always
Feels like a PARSONS AWARD
BIG LIKE THAT
Thank you
You've mentioned them a lot
Yes, I played around here with some different concepts, I think you got me now. I keep trying. Never know how it's going to shape out but that's the beauty of writing poetry. I'm not disciplined but I do over writing in general from sex to observation....
Appreciate your visits as always
Feels like a PARSONS AWARD
BIG LIKE THAT
Thank you
Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 11:48am
I want to know your thoughts first, then possess them. Soaking up the beautiful darkness and allowing the pain to cleanse a restless tortured mind at least for a moment. I love black roses, elegant and mysterious with unrivaled beauty.
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 12:56pm
You know me so well
You have taken some of my thoughts and processed them.
We walk similar roads of pain and know the benefits of working within that garden.
Black Roses are the anti-hero, they illuminate the very thing they are, beautiful darkness
Thank you for your vision......
You have taken some of my thoughts and processed them.
We walk similar roads of pain and know the benefits of working within that garden.
Black Roses are the anti-hero, they illuminate the very thing they are, beautiful darkness
Thank you for your vision......
Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:09pm
Sometimes the ultimate price may be worth it (?) Stimulating write. Hugs and peace, General. O
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
13th Oct 2021 2:25pm
Re. You Want to Possess Me
14th Oct 2021 4:20am
Hot Damn Poet you crushed it with this heated fueled passionate write.
I interpret an incredible symmetry of pain and pleasure connotations with this masterful write.
There is nothing routine about this when indulgence of solace is sought by a bouquet of black roses.
A pure dark tragic love written brilliantly.
I am in awe with your dark ink sir!
.... R/L!!!!!!!!!!!!
I interpret an incredible symmetry of pain and pleasure connotations with this masterful write.
There is nothing routine about this when indulgence of solace is sought by a bouquet of black roses.
A pure dark tragic love written brilliantly.
I am in awe with your dark ink sir!
.... R/L!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
Wow Feet
How am I going to get my swollen head through rye door now
You got me my 20th comment and RL
Dang
Stay tuned for more DARK son,I'm at home there
Thx Feet
How am I going to get my swollen head through rye door now
You got me my 20th comment and RL
Dang
Stay tuned for more DARK son,I'm at home there
Thx Feet
Re. You Want to Possess Me
15th Oct 2021 11:14pm
Re: Re. You Want to Possess Me
15th Oct 2021 11:21pm
To know me is to explode with riveting passion
Of course there could be a price for that
Are you willing to take that chance mysteriouslady ??
Of course there could be a price for that
Are you willing to take that chance mysteriouslady ??
Re. You Want to Possess Me
22nd Oct 2021 11:22pm
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22nd Oct 2021 11:25pm