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all that remains
Tear trail residue
sadly lingers
as proof
that the pain— was real
Author's Note
A four line inspiration via the word play group.
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12th Oct 2021 12:16pm
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Re: Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 12:20pm
*tips my hat
I humbly thank you.
-x
I very much appreciate those kind words, T
It's sincerely meaningful to me - 💙
🌹 -B
I humbly thank you.
-x
I very much appreciate those kind words, T
It's sincerely meaningful to me - 💙
🌹 -B
Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 7:00pm
Re: Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 8:03pm
Dawww.... I needed this comment!!!
☺ (hugs) 🤗
You're the best, dear Ron
Thanks for the lovely sentiments
Back @ ya!
🌹 - xo
B
☺ (hugs) 🤗
You're the best, dear Ron
Thanks for the lovely sentiments
Back @ ya!
🌹 - xo
B
Re: Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 8:14pm
Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 7:09pm
Dear BV,
The validation this poem evokes is like manna from heaven. Sometimes I wonder if I’ve imagined feelings when I’ve been upset and reading this says I didn’t. Pain is real big or small. I love the ratio of the impact the minimal poems can have on huge emotions. Wonderful piece. H🌷
The validation this poem evokes is like manna from heaven. Sometimes I wonder if I’ve imagined feelings when I’ve been upset and reading this says I didn’t. Pain is real big or small. I love the ratio of the impact the minimal poems can have on huge emotions. Wonderful piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 8:34pm
Hey there, Honoria :)
I definitely appreciate exactly what you've described. I have always been overly sensitive and sometimes I've wondered if my deep intensity is just my own proclivity to feel pain as deeply as I do or plain over reaction.... (which I hate saying because we woman have always been stigmatized as 'hysterical' or as over reacting!)
I have slowly learned that my feelings are valid and true, regardless of how much I try to dismiss or diminish them. Yours, too... sweet lady!!
I am so grateful that you felt a connection here and enjoyed the minimalism. Your visits are always such a highlight that I continually look forward to!
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
I definitely appreciate exactly what you've described. I have always been overly sensitive and sometimes I've wondered if my deep intensity is just my own proclivity to feel pain as deeply as I do or plain over reaction.... (which I hate saying because we woman have always been stigmatized as 'hysterical' or as over reacting!)
I have slowly learned that my feelings are valid and true, regardless of how much I try to dismiss or diminish them. Yours, too... sweet lady!!
I am so grateful that you felt a connection here and enjoyed the minimalism. Your visits are always such a highlight that I continually look forward to!
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 7:17pm
Re: Re. all that remains
Only good 'completely overwhelmed' tears.... *wink
Thanks for reading Leo!
🌹 - 💙 - 🤗
xx
Thanks for reading Leo!
🌹 - 💙 - 🤗
xx
Re: Re. all that remains
13th Oct 2021 1:40am
Based on your tags, that type of trail wasn't considered. But I like how you think! : )
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Re: Re. all that remains
13th Oct 2021 1:59am
Re. all that remains
12th Oct 2021 9:06pm
Pain heals then jump on the horse to find love again. You ride that person hard so you can feel orgasmic bliss, LOL. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. all that remains
15th Oct 2021 7:34am
I definitely do keep the pen to paper, always!! .... Thanks, Francisco. ...Just a gentle remember that it's also about respect, love, sensuality, tenderness, etc... As well as orgasmic bliss. ...I feel .It's important to keep that in mind......
Thanks so much for the dynamic comments.
You know I always appreciate your deeply kind support....and faithfulness in readership
🌹
Thanks so much for the dynamic comments.
You know I always appreciate your deeply kind support....and faithfulness in readership
🌹
Re. all that remains
13th Oct 2021 5:34am
this is beautiful !
(I also sometimes get ideas by just commenting on word games, not as beautiful as this ;) )
(I also sometimes get ideas by just commenting on word games, not as beautiful as this ;) )
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Re: Re. all that remains
13th Oct 2021 6:05am
Awww!!
Thanks so so much!
Yesss!, I love doing those word games.. lol ... I think it allows my mind to kind of relax and take it easy maybe sort of like being on autopilot, then sometimes (if I'm very lucky) lightning will strike!!
It's soothing.... haha 😂.
Your comments are so uplifting and kind, it's a joy to see you and learn your thoughts 🦋
I'm delighted that you enjoyed reading.
Thanks again-
✨
🌹 - B
Thanks so so much!
Yesss!, I love doing those word games.. lol ... I think it allows my mind to kind of relax and take it easy maybe sort of like being on autopilot, then sometimes (if I'm very lucky) lightning will strike!!
It's soothing.... haha 😂.
Your comments are so uplifting and kind, it's a joy to see you and learn your thoughts 🦋
I'm delighted that you enjoyed reading.
Thanks again-
✨
🌹 - B
Re: Re. all that remains
14th Oct 2021 10:29am
Yess.. I enjoyed your comments as well.
I did and do enjoy your writes, am sorry that I couldn't check them sooner. :)
I did and do enjoy your writes, am sorry that I couldn't check them sooner. :)
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Re. all that remains
14th Oct 2021 12:41pm
It is astounding to me the remnants that are the sole evidence of a given thing,
which calls into question the very nature of the things we consider to be real.
I am a fan of The Doors and Jim Morrison.
I found this really well written biography of Morrison at a second hand book store.
There is this photo of him up in the rafters of a venue... like a phantom of the opera... :)))
but the caption read something like:
"Morrison watches the chaos he initiated,
as though awakening from a trance."
It was such a cool pic... (let me see if I can find... wow... I can normally
find pics rather easily... will try again)
but yes... I think so many facets of existence are much like this,
for a variety of reasons...
I like the underlying truth(s) of this piece.
Beautiful.
which calls into question the very nature of the things we consider to be real.
I am a fan of The Doors and Jim Morrison.
I found this really well written biography of Morrison at a second hand book store.
There is this photo of him up in the rafters of a venue... like a phantom of the opera... :)))
but the caption read something like:
"Morrison watches the chaos he initiated,
as though awakening from a trance."
It was such a cool pic... (let me see if I can find... wow... I can normally
find pics rather easily... will try again)
but yes... I think so many facets of existence are much like this,
for a variety of reasons...
I like the underlying truth(s) of this piece.
Beautiful.
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Re: Re. all that remains
You and I are cut from a version of the same cloth.... I just know it...( Jim Morrison and the Doors you say?.... lol...)
Maybe Rian is cut from it, too...hahahaha
I wrote the following for a comp of Rian's ..
Thought maybe you'd like it and better understand why I feel your comments were so impactful...
I too, love the Lizard King....
Thanks for your thoughtful and poignantly beautiful comments, my lovely sympatico friend...
*wink
🦎 - 💙
x
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/414548-to-feast-of-a-roaring-light/
Maybe Rian is cut from it, too...hahahaha
I wrote the following for a comp of Rian's ..
Thought maybe you'd like it and better understand why I feel your comments were so impactful...
I too, love the Lizard King....
Thanks for your thoughtful and poignantly beautiful comments, my lovely sympatico friend...
*wink
🦎 - 💙
x
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/414548-to-feast-of-a-roaring-light/
Re. all that remains
22nd Oct 2021 8:19pm
Very true and very real. I love that your brevity weighs so heavy with honesty and truth.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. all that remains
22nd Oct 2021 8:56pm