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layers of insaninkty
this love we found
heartbreaking
breathtaking
soul-shaking
his love never up for grabs
became mine for the taking
stop asking
if we have already met
(or kissed, hugged or fucked)
NO,
not yet!
I may live inside his head
but don't get
to share his damn bed
...
about to go insane
this strain
the pain
yet much to gain
so we sustain
remain
complain
hop a plane
it won't be in vain
heartbreaking
breathtaking
soul-shaking
his love never up for grabs
became mine for the taking
stop asking
if we have already met
(or kissed, hugged or fucked)
NO,
not yet!
I may live inside his head
but don't get
to share his damn bed
...
about to go insane
this strain
the pain
yet much to gain
so we sustain
remain
complain
hop a plane
it won't be in vain
Published 11th Oct 2021
| Edited 8th Nov 2021
Author's Note
Sometimes ink is the only relief.
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11th Oct 2021 11:53pm
12th Oct 2021 00:45am
It literally dripped out of my pen. It really needed out!
Appreciate the comment.
Delanee 🌻
Appreciate the comment.
Delanee 🌻
12th Oct 2021 00:19am
I'll have a shot of whiskey with my beer. Sometimes love can be a boiler maker. You captured that!
12th Oct 2021 00:47am
Yeah, a shot of whiskey seems appropriate. Thanks for the compliment, too.
Cheers!
Delanee 🌻
Cheers!
Delanee 🌻
12th Oct 2021 00:58am
18th Oct 2021 6:44pm
There's something so poetically erotic to a man about a woman in distress, as if to tell himself that he could save her...Nicely crafted writing, incisive!
