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Arials of Transcendence
Author's Note
A friend of mine took this lovely photograph, stating that they knew I would appreciate it...
Which was thought provoking to me...
Nevertheless... I decided to write a poem to it...
:)))
Which was thought provoking to me...
Nevertheless... I decided to write a poem to it...
:)))
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Re. Arials of Transcendence
10th Oct 2021 1:15pm
Dear CO,
Well, whether you truly ended up personally appreciating the photo or not, you sure did write a wonderful poem that blended words and photo beautifully. Both leant themselves so well to “out of smoldering ruins”. That’s very cool. “Practiced in chaos Highness of lows Transcendence” I was very caught up in this phrase. For me, this really described my mind when actively thinking. And when I’m finally able to organize my thoughts to some semblance of coherency I’m transcended because it’s like a fog lifting. I think this was a great job between photo and poem combination. Very striking. H🌷
Well, whether you truly ended up personally appreciating the photo or not, you sure did write a wonderful poem that blended words and photo beautifully. Both leant themselves so well to “out of smoldering ruins”. That’s very cool. “Practiced in chaos Highness of lows Transcendence” I was very caught up in this phrase. For me, this really described my mind when actively thinking. And when I’m finally able to organize my thoughts to some semblance of coherency I’m transcended because it’s like a fog lifting. I think this was a great job between photo and poem combination. Very striking. H🌷
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Re: Re. Arials of Transcendence
11th Oct 2021 9:29am
Thank you H.
It is so strange.
I have been seeking to honor the triggering mechanism,
and listen to the wave form,
to vibrate with and become the wave...
but it's like... My mind opens up and I can see multiple destinations, like string theory or something...
And often times or maybe all the time,
the piece has a tendency to go to the least expected place.
Some would say that is a good methodology...?
Nevertheless... I am very happy that the energies of this piece resonated with you, as I have a great reverence for your perspective.
Thank you my Gorgeous Friend.
:)))
It is so strange.
I have been seeking to honor the triggering mechanism,
and listen to the wave form,
to vibrate with and become the wave...
but it's like... My mind opens up and I can see multiple destinations, like string theory or something...
And often times or maybe all the time,
the piece has a tendency to go to the least expected place.
Some would say that is a good methodology...?
Nevertheless... I am very happy that the energies of this piece resonated with you, as I have a great reverence for your perspective.
Thank you my Gorgeous Friend.
:)))
Re. Arials of Transcendence
The colors morph, in resplendence and are so exquisitely poignant; they burst into a painting-like beautiful spray of mother nature— giving us an excellent example of just how incredibly small and minute we are, within the scheme of things....
Transcending from our (mostly) battered versions of the selfishness of 'here and now' to become just even the tiniest bit enlightened enough to recognize the importance of an "eternal presence' and of (the potential) of a sort of pure peace that flows from that natural essence in a type of cleansing that only nature provides....
Just my thoughts, that your thoughts inspired!!
Truly otherworldly pic and poem.
Uplifting and embraced of powerful invigoration.
🌹 - 💙
Thanks for that.
x
Transcending from our (mostly) battered versions of the selfishness of 'here and now' to become just even the tiniest bit enlightened enough to recognize the importance of an "eternal presence' and of (the potential) of a sort of pure peace that flows from that natural essence in a type of cleansing that only nature provides....
Just my thoughts, that your thoughts inspired!!
Truly otherworldly pic and poem.
Uplifting and embraced of powerful invigoration.
🌹 - 💙
Thanks for that.
x
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Re: Re. Arials of Transcendence
11th Oct 2021 9:42am
I adore your mind B.
I think, initially, what captured my attention was the dichotomy, drawn in my mind, between the modern and the the eternal (or that which is eternal, relative to those aspects of our selves that take the shape of the mortal?)
I thought the lights had a sort of dangling appearance, that lent to the construct of ascending layers of perspective, both physical and mental... and even spiritual...
I also thought of the primal energy that permeates in electricity, in the mind of my memories...
How the inception of street lights brings about an awareness of the unknown that infuses into the ensuing night and expanding darkness...
Oh... What exquisite wickedness that might be performed...
:)))
And this primal feeling is somehow reborn anew, with each switching on of the lights...
Lights...
Two songs that came to me in a dungeon:
Lights by Ellie Goulding
&
Lights In the Sky by NIN
I was in solitary confinement but there was a window... a small ass window that looked out at the expressway...
Man... I was so grateful for that window...
I used to watch the cars at night... and the lights...
Oh the lights...
The lights of the night...
Fucking glorious...
What places my mind traveled to...
What heart breaks absorbed into the darkness...
Nevertheless...
Thank you so much for your beautiful, depth inducing words from the deeps of you, a most beautiful and beauteous creature...
Blu.
:)))
I think, initially, what captured my attention was the dichotomy, drawn in my mind, between the modern and the the eternal (or that which is eternal, relative to those aspects of our selves that take the shape of the mortal?)
I thought the lights had a sort of dangling appearance, that lent to the construct of ascending layers of perspective, both physical and mental... and even spiritual...
I also thought of the primal energy that permeates in electricity, in the mind of my memories...
How the inception of street lights brings about an awareness of the unknown that infuses into the ensuing night and expanding darkness...
Oh... What exquisite wickedness that might be performed...
:)))
And this primal feeling is somehow reborn anew, with each switching on of the lights...
Lights...
Two songs that came to me in a dungeon:
Lights by Ellie Goulding
&
Lights In the Sky by NIN
I was in solitary confinement but there was a window... a small ass window that looked out at the expressway...
Man... I was so grateful for that window...
I used to watch the cars at night... and the lights...
Oh the lights...
The lights of the night...
Fucking glorious...
What places my mind traveled to...
What heart breaks absorbed into the darkness...
Nevertheless...
Thank you so much for your beautiful, depth inducing words from the deeps of you, a most beautiful and beauteous creature...
Blu.
:)))
Re: Re. Arials of Transcendence
12th Oct 2021 4:49am
Re. Arials of Transcendence
14th Oct 2021 2:45pm
dearest Cipher you know some relate to the spirits out there only in pure power and chaos
witness the power of a firestorm or a tornado
I was watching a storm chaser and pow right above the sky cracked and lightening struck
he was so excited and happy...
I believe that's how I creator really is chaos...
great write...
witness the power of a firestorm or a tornado
I was watching a storm chaser and pow right above the sky cracked and lightening struck
he was so excited and happy...
I believe that's how I creator really is chaos...
great write...
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Re: Re. Arials of Transcendence
14th Oct 2021 3:30pm
Pure power and chaos...
If ever I wondered who you are,
I could find these elements,
and there I would find you.
I like that very much.
My greatest desire is that
my energy had the ability to enhance your energy.
I deeply value your perspective.
Your energy enhances my energy.
Gratitude.
If ever I wondered who you are,
I could find these elements,
and there I would find you.
I like that very much.
My greatest desire is that
my energy had the ability to enhance your energy.
I deeply value your perspective.
Your energy enhances my energy.
Gratitude.