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4:51
V1
It's already 4:51
Are there wrong ways to fall in love?
Stuck in heartbreak,
where every fault gets the best of me.
V2
You don't deserve to see
what I wear when I go to sleep
'til you tell me who i am;
'cause underneath is my history.
*instrumental*
V3
I have to get up soon,
drive myself to therapy at noon
Can I call you?
I'm going crazy in my room.
V4
Slow dancing in the dark,
Burning tears, light up in the park.
i'm sorry,
I left my guitar in your car.
Bridge
Can I stay at your place?
I can face that way.
Smoke you out, 'til I'm safe
All I want you to see is the best of me.
Like the salt to my sweet,
let's stay up, make a beat.
We can fight, just don't scream
'cause all I want you to bring out is the best of me
Instrumental/outro
It's already 4:51
Are there wrong ways to fall in love?
Stuck in heartbreak,
where every fault gets the best of me.
V2
You don't deserve to see
what I wear when I go to sleep
'til you tell me who i am;
'cause underneath is my history.
*instrumental*
V3
I have to get up soon,
drive myself to therapy at noon
Can I call you?
I'm going crazy in my room.
V4
Slow dancing in the dark,
Burning tears, light up in the park.
i'm sorry,
I left my guitar in your car.
Bridge
Can I stay at your place?
I can face that way.
Smoke you out, 'til I'm safe
All I want you to see is the best of me.
Like the salt to my sweet,
let's stay up, make a beat.
We can fight, just don't scream
'cause all I want you to bring out is the best of me
Instrumental/outro
Published 9th Oct 2021
Author's Note
Song I wrote but forgot the chords and didn't like it anyway.
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10th Oct 2021 00:34am
I'm not quite sure why but somehow that last sentence stuck with me
"'cause all I want you to bring out is the best of me" *mic drop*
I liked how you played with "the best of" theme. An alternative would been to have an "of me" theme with still the same ending.
"'cause all I want you to bring out is the best of me" *mic drop*
I liked how you played with "the best of" theme. An alternative would been to have an "of me" theme with still the same ending.
