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Be Luminous
Some of the surfaces are smooth,
window panes
made in the pain
of heat and pressure
in depths of deeps - beyond all measure,
Beyond
Earthly eyes, so very mundane
and plain,
blind to the plane
of
Your
Domain,
Bleeding down the canvas of my perception
in
Octarine,
Commingling,
in
clouds
of
Vows
of
eternal
Demands,
Written in parallel universe strands,
Confirmed
in facets
of knife fights
of
the
self -
In the picture of serenity as surrender.
Published 9th Oct 2021
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9th Oct 2021 12:54pm
You made me Google a word in this one, but I really like this poem.
The spaciousness makes for sort of meditative quality, which I like in your poetry.
A hard fought surrender to fate, maybe, or some aspect of divinity.
The spaciousness makes for sort of meditative quality, which I like in your poetry.
A hard fought surrender to fate, maybe, or some aspect of divinity.
10th Oct 2021 11:48am
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9th Oct 2021 6:43pm
Atmospheric is a good word for this; or ethereal is more what I felt. Interesting the triangle; been receiving that image a myriad of ways as of late. Even incorporating it into my sacred space.
Thank you for sharing. We could all be more luminous if we tried.
Thank you for sharing. We could all be more luminous if we tried.
10th Oct 2021 11:49am
Anonymous
9th Oct 2021 8:30pm
Superb write. Really liked this. Total admiration.
10th Oct 2021 11:49am
Anonymous
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