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Dreams
I lie in bed
listening
to the quietness
that surrounds me
the world
doesn’t seem to move
and the clock
doesn’t seem to tick
not tonight
my soul
drips slowly
through my fingers
falling
down gently
like a summers rain
caressing my skin
the sweet scent
filling
my entire body
the darkness
carries me
into my dreams
and they
take me
ever so gently
and ever so sweetly
listening
to the quietness
that surrounds me
the world
doesn’t seem to move
and the clock
doesn’t seem to tick
not tonight
my soul
drips slowly
through my fingers
falling
down gently
like a summers rain
caressing my skin
the sweet scent
filling
my entire body
the darkness
carries me
into my dreams
and they
take me
ever so gently
and ever so sweetly
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Re. Dreams
7th Oct 2021 1:47am
such nice words pertaining to dreams.
thank you for sharing that dream state
thank you for sharing that dream state
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Re: Re. Dreams
7th Oct 2021 1:51am
You're welcome and thank you, for stopping by to leave such a wonderful comment!
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7th Oct 2021 11:57am
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Re. Dreams
7th Oct 2021 12:39pm
Very dreamy and but full of sensual passion. I know where my mind went...
'my soul
drips slowly
through my fingers
falling
down gently
like a summers rain
caressing my skin'
That is super sexy... Love it!
'my soul
drips slowly
through my fingers
falling
down gently
like a summers rain
caressing my skin'
That is super sexy... Love it!
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Re. Dreams
9th Oct 2021 5:24pm
Sweet... gentle darkness... I like the image of darkness you portrayed carrying one into another world... like a father carrying a sleeping child to bed... sweet gentle darkness...the loving protector taking us into the unknown. Thank you.
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Re. Dreams
9th Oct 2021 5:27pm