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Taste of Mango
After meeting and crucifixion - separation,
Waiting tears from the inside
This is a sweet-passionate torment,
This is a hot maze game
I am languishing in bitter vanilla,
And through my veins, not blood, but nectar
I will drown in you, in a tender-strength,
Let the fire burn me with passion
I want to touch your hands,
I want to bite your lips
What do you want?! Be very strict!
Do you want me to play deliciously?
Smear the tears on my cheeks,
Subdue. I will become obedient
"Hush, girl ..." - say in a whisper,
You will knock me over, so unexpectedly
You pull my hair greedily in your hand,
Touch it roughly, sweet and impudently
From what I'm dying, you know
I am tonight with the taste of mango
I can't feel the floor under my feet,
I want you more and I'm very wet
Your voice brings goosebumps,
Love me, it's so exciting!
Consume all of me very tasty,
Leave drops of passion on your lips
Punish, so skillfully, mercilessly,
Scold me hard in the corners ...
Waiting tears from the inside
This is a sweet-passionate torment,
This is a hot maze game
I am languishing in bitter vanilla,
And through my veins, not blood, but nectar
I will drown in you, in a tender-strength,
Let the fire burn me with passion
I want to touch your hands,
I want to bite your lips
What do you want?! Be very strict!
Do you want me to play deliciously?
Smear the tears on my cheeks,
Subdue. I will become obedient
"Hush, girl ..." - say in a whisper,
You will knock me over, so unexpectedly
You pull my hair greedily in your hand,
Touch it roughly, sweet and impudently
From what I'm dying, you know
I am tonight with the taste of mango
I can't feel the floor under my feet,
I want you more and I'm very wet
Your voice brings goosebumps,
Love me, it's so exciting!
Consume all of me very tasty,
Leave drops of passion on your lips
Punish, so skillfully, mercilessly,
Scold me hard in the corners ...
Published 5th Oct 2021
Author's Note
I really need a mango lassi... 🥭
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5th Oct 2021 9:15pm
Deliciously weaved with a wanton desire and the bitten lip sublime...I'll be joining you for at least one :)
5th Oct 2021 9:28pm
Oh Tim! which one will you be joining me for? ;p Wanton desire always and a bitten lip is just a casualty of passion. 🥭🫦💋🥭 Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. ;) xoxo
5th Oct 2021 9:56pm
5th Oct 2021 10:51pm
Hey NB! Always great to see you. I have so many desires that they are always spilling out somewhere, may as well be here too. ;p I am really happy you found it nicely done. Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. xoxo 🥭🫦💋🥭
5th Oct 2021 11:57pm
The thought of mango juices sliding down creamy thighs that can only be capture with licks and biting tugs at the flesh. To hold them down until their all is cleaned up before the dam is broken. This is the sweetest of mango, broken, hot, creamy, willing, and drawn to the shadows to be consumed. The time between this time and the next must be torture, the ultimate sacrifice of wanting. Tight work Lil X
Hell yes! Before the dam is broken indeed. I feel like the dam is having a hard time holding back the water already with that description. I_IS_ME. lol Definitely willing and drawn to the shadows always, it's more fun in the shadows. The time in between is definitely a sweet torment, but when finally fulfilled, oh my god! until next time... I love getting a tight work! Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. xoxo 🥭🫦💋🥭
5th Oct 2021 10:02pm
One of your most succulent writes
Knocking you down and hair pulling a plus
No wonder I need bdsm for breakfast
You're my kind of depraved
Love this ink
BIG BITE LIKE
FUCKING RL FOR BAD GIRLS
YOU'VE BEEN DONE
Knocking you down and hair pulling a plus
No wonder I need bdsm for breakfast
You're my kind of depraved
Love this ink
BIG BITE LIKE
FUCKING RL FOR BAD GIRLS
YOU'VE BEEN DONE
Damn right! I am so happy you think it's one of the most succulent. Love it! Sometimes you just need it rough. ;) BDSM for breakfast is time consuming but a great way to start the day. Or start and continue through the end on the weekend... Yes, depraved. I have to admit it. Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. xoxo 🥭🫦💋🥭
Loving the BIG BITE LIKE and FUCKING BAD GIRL RL.
Loving the BIG BITE LIKE and FUCKING BAD GIRL RL.
5th Oct 2021 11:49pm
6th Oct 2021 00:38am
Hey Ron! I do love turning up the intensity so I am glad you found it super hot and sexy! Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 And much love and light. (with some dark too) xoxo
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6th Oct 2021 00:38am
Hey BP! That is certainly a possibility, so many preparations to make in order to get the dam to break. Got to find some Mango lassis too. Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
6th Oct 2021 1:26am
6th Oct 2021 12:03pm
They told me not to play with matches but I didn't listen. I plan to keep catching you on fire over and over again Francisco. Thank you for joining me in the flames and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
6th Oct 2021 1:29pm
6th Oct 2021 4:30am
6th Oct 2021 12:17pm
Hey BC! I love casting spells and hauling you into my sensual incantation. And I am happy that you could feel my pleasure. ;) Thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
6th Oct 2021 12:36pm
such the sweetness of said fruit
yet my take,
firstly, its biblical overtones the stanzas rake.
... the tip of the soldier's spear
and the tear drops that smear
secondly
maybe i read into it more
but all the passion within this "maze"
combining and fruitful, a sweetening haze.
reasons to reverently obey.
on doctrine, your words i have found
body and soul bound.
the juice of the mango does lay.
impeccable, as all of your writes.
yet my take,
firstly, its biblical overtones the stanzas rake.
... the tip of the soldier's spear
and the tear drops that smear
secondly
maybe i read into it more
but all the passion within this "maze"
combining and fruitful, a sweetening haze.
reasons to reverently obey.
on doctrine, your words i have found
body and soul bound.
the juice of the mango does lay.
impeccable, as all of your writes.
6th Oct 2021 1:14pm
I had not thought of it as biblical overtones but I see it now that you pointed it out. Oh yes! the tip of the soldier's spear ready to strike is exciting. You will be exhausted trying to find a way out of this maze. ;) Sometimes to obey comes with great benefits; agreeing to this doctrine. I am so happy you like my writing! Deer in the headlights. Thank you so much and thank you for joining me and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
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6th Oct 2021 3:02pm
I am so happy to create images in your head Darkwords. I appreciate the compliment so much. And not fair, now I want to see in your head, to be astonished and feel the waves caress and break ashore. More than erotic, Wow Deer in the headlights. Really love that! Thank you for joining me in my head and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
Anonymous
7th Oct 2021 3:49am
My favorite line here:
a hot maze game
That conveys effectively the labyrinth of sexual desire, the most ancient and powerful force that can exist between a man and a woman.
DH Lawrence wrote beautifully about this topic in an essay on Benjamin Franklin(!), that the sexual impulse is "an offering up" to the primal force of attraction between a man and a woman:
"Follow your passional impulse, if it be answered in the other being; but never have any
motive in mind, neither offspring nor health nor even pleasure, nor even service. Only know that 'venery' is of the great gods. An offering-up of yourself to the very great gods, the dark ones, and nothing else."
The first time I read that quotation I thought "venery" had something to do with eating deer.
Enjoy the image of "languishing in bitter vanilla," as it creates a contrast with the overwhelming sweetness of most fruits--yet vanilla has a rich sensuality that's also spare, almost geometric.
The 1st 2 lines are very provocative--the crucifixion imagery and the idea of separation, tears inside, like seeds in a dry gourd...
All this is sort of beside the point, though: what comes across to the reader, and is inescapable, is the frankness of the expression of desire, the full-throated confrontation of the desire within the self.
Powerful stuff...heady, like vanilla.
Enjoyed!
a hot maze game
That conveys effectively the labyrinth of sexual desire, the most ancient and powerful force that can exist between a man and a woman.
DH Lawrence wrote beautifully about this topic in an essay on Benjamin Franklin(!), that the sexual impulse is "an offering up" to the primal force of attraction between a man and a woman:
"Follow your passional impulse, if it be answered in the other being; but never have any
motive in mind, neither offspring nor health nor even pleasure, nor even service. Only know that 'venery' is of the great gods. An offering-up of yourself to the very great gods, the dark ones, and nothing else."
The first time I read that quotation I thought "venery" had something to do with eating deer.
Enjoy the image of "languishing in bitter vanilla," as it creates a contrast with the overwhelming sweetness of most fruits--yet vanilla has a rich sensuality that's also spare, almost geometric.
The 1st 2 lines are very provocative--the crucifixion imagery and the idea of separation, tears inside, like seeds in a dry gourd...
All this is sort of beside the point, though: what comes across to the reader, and is inescapable, is the frankness of the expression of desire, the full-throated confrontation of the desire within the self.
Powerful stuff...heady, like vanilla.
Enjoyed!
Oh yes! that maze can be very dangerous but full of rewards. It is indeed the most ancient and powerful force. It has driven people to great and also horrible things throughout history. :) I like the view of it as an offering to the primal force of attraction; that definitely resonates with me.
I love that quote, it is very powerful. I had to look up 'venery' so I am so grateful to have learned a new word today. 'the very great gods, the dark ones' I find that very interesting that it singles out the dark ones.
Indeed to sweet can be over powering while vanilla is sensual, sexy, tastes and smell beautiful with just enough bitter.
I am glad the first two lines made an impression. They were definitely meant to express something very deep.
In the end it is about pushing the limits of desire, pain, and pleasure. So happy you found it powerful, and heady, and enjoyed it. Your thoughts are always very interesting. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
I love that quote, it is very powerful. I had to look up 'venery' so I am so grateful to have learned a new word today. 'the very great gods, the dark ones' I find that very interesting that it singles out the dark ones.
Indeed to sweet can be over powering while vanilla is sensual, sexy, tastes and smell beautiful with just enough bitter.
I am glad the first two lines made an impression. They were definitely meant to express something very deep.
In the end it is about pushing the limits of desire, pain, and pleasure. So happy you found it powerful, and heady, and enjoyed it. Your thoughts are always very interesting. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
10th Oct 2021 3:19am
Yes, a mango lassi is divine and the tattered summer dress is a great fashion statement to compliment that beautiful sweetness. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
15th Oct 2021 4:31am
I would agree with another comment. This is well written first, than wildly enticing next. You engage all kinds of emotions and thoughts in the reader. Not to mention the raw, magnetic, and unapologetic delivery done with much style! Great work 😎
Hey William! I am so happy you found it wildly enticing and engaging emotions. And I really love raw and magnetic ... :) It's always wonderful to see feedback like this and I appreciate it so much. Thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
20th Oct 2021 6:05pm
I held on to my skittles, but dropped my pop-corn.
Kristina, you really turned up the heat on this. Passionate, lustful and full of naughty play.
Nicely done.
Kristina, you really turned up the heat on this. Passionate, lustful and full of naughty play.
Nicely done.
20th Oct 2021 6:29pm
Damnit, I really wanted those skittles. lol Next time they are mine. Pop corn will have to do for now. I will turn up the heat some more; perhaps the skittles will melt though. Thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
6th Nov 2021 3:44pm
There is a great connection between the erotic moments of submission and the fulfillment of unrecognized cravings. Sometimes just letting it happen is the greatest ecstasy.
Oh yes! I couldn't agree more. So many beautiful and incredible discoveries to be made, making each other's fantasies all come true. Just letting go and immersing yourself in the ecstasy. mmm. :) Thank you for reading and giving me your thoughts. 🥭🫦💋🥭 xoxo
