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wishful dreaming
I wish you would
dream about me
when asleep,
but a wish is just
a dream,
and a dream is
just a wish,
and the light from
the sun will never
shine into their dark
valley's,
as I will never walk
the mirrored hallways
of your dreamscape,
or be a wish that
you wish would
ever come
true.
Published 5th Oct 2021
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- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
5th Oct 2021 6:35am
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6th Oct 2021 3:58am
Thank you, Ted. Much appreciated.
Yes, I am doing well as I hope you are.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Yes, I am doing well as I hope you are.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
6th Oct 2021 2:59pm
6th Oct 2021 3:22pm
10th Oct 2021 9:18pm
Thare is something so bravely boldly the 'nevers' & no's here .. accentuating the straight talk & sternness & stance & a statement in unleash .of righteous rage outburst..all in a delicate done bitterness ..aww dunn know what i say here.. but you fo your poetics intense n talking as ev .thanks & write on bk x
10th Oct 2021 11:17pm
I think you said it accurately, uma.
Thank you so much for the kind words.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you so much for the kind words.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Oct 2021 9:28pm
14th Oct 2021 11:25pm
20th Oct 2021 3:48pm
Maybe once this poem is out into the universe, it will speak and go into those dreams.
Lovely spill BK.
Lovely spill BK.
20th Oct 2021 3:53pm
