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against the wind
along its rails...
as the sheet
pulled. tight and in.
the bow just off point
into the wind...
our direction we anoint.
to dance the waves.
foaming and yauld
lifted we
on this, close hauled.
sturdy and steady,
at the whims of our keel,
will destiny seal...
for how does a fairie tale end?
as the sheet
pulled. tight and in.
the bow just off point
into the wind...
our direction we anoint.
to dance the waves.
foaming and yauld
lifted we
on this, close hauled.
sturdy and steady,
at the whims of our keel,
will destiny seal...
for how does a fairie tale end?
Published 2nd Oct 2021
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2nd Oct 2021 3:06pm
Really like this one ... it has a timeless feel to it ... I am doing an online course on the English Romantic poets ... this poem echoes of Coleridge ... well penned dear poet ...
3rd Oct 2021 10:12am
thank you for your comment
maybe slight, very slight
the "echoes of Coleridge" so kind of you to suggest.
maybe slight, very slight
the "echoes of Coleridge" so kind of you to suggest.
2nd Oct 2021 3:23pm
2nd Oct 2021 3:42pm
3rd Oct 2021 5:57am
They end in unimaginable heartbreak, rarely ever spoken, but felt in the silence...
3rd Oct 2021 6:38pm
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3rd Oct 2021 6:39pm
4th Oct 2021 5:25pm
Loved the symbolism and imagery especially the waves and wind... made me feel like I was back at the beach. Could feel the magic. Dreamy! Great write.
5th Oct 2021 12:18pm
glad the words could unlock and transpose.
grateful for your time to read and comment.
grateful for your time to read and comment.
