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Chasing love (A rondelet)
When love is felt
to suffer pain, and bruising welts
when love is felt
trying to bluff the hand your dealt
With courage find your inner self
arrows, with trust and Cupids help
when love is felt
to suffer pain, and bruising welts
when love is felt
trying to bluff the hand your dealt
With courage find your inner self
arrows, with trust and Cupids help
when love is felt
Published 1st Oct 2021
| Edited 4th Oct 2021
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1st Oct 2021 8:12pm
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2021 10:07pm
This one is really good you took the rondelet and made it a monorhyme... lol it's a winner in my books:)
I liked the flow of you message. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for participating.
LJ
LJ
14th Oct 2021 8:07am
thanks a lot LJD, its a new form for me to compose gave it my best shot. trophy's seem very sparse lately must be loosing my edge my poetry suffered a long covid infection !
31st Jan 2022 5:20pm
