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Sharp Words
her razor cut
like a tongue
trailing saliva
across fleshy expanses
warm droplets
crimson on pink
descending
slowly
toward
oblivion
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
like a tongue
trailing saliva
across fleshy expanses
warm droplets
crimson on pink
descending
slowly
toward
oblivion
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 29th Sep 2021
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29th Sep 2021 4:49pm
29th Sep 2021 7:17pm
4th Oct 2021 7:42pm
Anonymous
29th Sep 2021 8:59pm
Ohhh myy... That slow march towards inevitable oblivion.... the brevity..... the mind swirls..... as the body..... reacts.
The unbelievable breadth of emotion, is proof of true excellence, imo...
Really impressive minimalism, dear KP!
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The unbelievable breadth of emotion, is proof of true excellence, imo...
Really impressive minimalism, dear KP!
🌹 - 💙
B
4th Oct 2021 7:43pm
