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leer
within the scorn there is love
sideways smiles lie
a leer is sometimes a genuine look inside
in the glaring truth we hide
our honesty shines
it isn't always easy to love a person
or to show that love
alone isn't always lonely
while being around people isn't always oneness
I seek to connect
then pull back when I find a dark facet
a reflection of my own darkness I think
none of us is good all the time
not to mention what is good
and by whose standards?
Published 29th Sep 2021
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30th Sep 2021 4:51am
29th Sep 2021 4:33am
30th Sep 2021 4:52am
30th Sep 2021 10:53am
Yes... By who's standards.
I think all that we have is us.
I think we evolve in the energies before us,
but in the end, all we have is us
And to possess the courage of our convictions is perhaps divine.
I thoroughly enjoyed this philosophical musing.
Beautiful.
I think all that we have is us.
I think we evolve in the energies before us,
but in the end, all we have is us
And to possess the courage of our convictions is perhaps divine.
I thoroughly enjoyed this philosophical musing.
Beautiful.
30th Sep 2021 6:59pm
good afternoon dearest Cipher I knew I spelled who's wrong damn it thank you for such a thoughtful comment I think we are all on separate quests experiencing different things this is a different world for each of us I'm happy to experience your company❤
30th Sep 2021 8:36pm
Working in these tight emotional spaces is like underwater welding....the subtle danger of exposure at the hands of vulnerability....courage and self-trust. Bravo.
20th Oct 2021 4:34pm
thank you graciously RT tricky business to be sure I try to post no wonder how vulnerable a write puts me it hurts sometimes💗
26th Oct 2021 00:20am
19th Oct 2021 2:27am
Great question crimsin. It feels as if these deep meditative states you delve into ideological ponderings and express them so honesty in these spills.
Well done.
Well done.
20th Oct 2021 4:37pm
thank you dearest Wally for your thoughts i feel like I'm constantly learning it's very difficult sometimes when you are open to the spirits knowing what are your own feelings and what are theirs...also when as time goes by your thoughts with your understanding shifts it can be difficult... I appreciate you dearest poet💗
